Reviews for Never Give In
Guest chapter 14 . 8/4/2013
Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
eltigre221 chapter 14 . 8/5/2013
ehehehe this gets better and better by the chapter! :D well until more, later and have fun writing :)
Jaki822 chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
OH MY GOD! You Updated!(fist pumps) Oh-Yeah!
Yesssssssss!
Wait? Starscream wants his own Autobot harem? (looks over at Bumblebee) uh oh! He is so scap!
duchesseduo chapter 14 . 8/4/2013
thank you for the update
Emajade32439 chapter 14 . 8/3/2013
Thank you for updating. When I first started reading this story I wasn't sure if I would like it, but I like how it is turning out so far. Can't wait tile the next chapter.
SlipknotGhidorah chapter 14 . 8/3/2013
I'm curious on what the Elite Guard would think of pregnant Decepticons. It would be interesting if Sentinel and the others found out about Valor, Blackarachnia, and Starscream. As for Ratchet, I know about Arcee, but...is there something more to that story than meets the eye? I look forward to the next chapter.
Diamondstar the Seeker chapter 14 . 8/3/2013
I'll kill Starscream and Megatron if they so much come near Optimus and his kid.

Megatron: It's mine kid too, you know

ZIP IT, MEGAFAT! OR THEY WILL START CALLING YOU MEGGIE FROM NOW ON! -looks ready to kill-
AkiraNatsume chapter 14 . 8/3/2013
More chapters please.
MissMary chapter 14 . 8/3/2013
Matters are getting interesting. Update when you can.
AkiraNatsume chapter 13 . 7/6/2013
More chapters please.
liliCartMan chapter 13 . 6/28/2013
A very good chapter: who knows if really Blackarachnia will have a better relationship with Autobots? especially considering that she's still sorry for her mutation and Ratchet says that it can't be cured. A little comfort is that Valour likes her spider powers

oooh what a tender scene, even if hot! :-) I totally melted in reading it Optimus and Elita together, and Optimus not caring at all her new appearance... so tough he even kisses her organic "monstruous" skin. And appreciating her "soft" Port :D
"daddy are you naked?" O_O and here I laughed a little. Eh Valour if you only knew! Valour and Sari mabe are too young to understand, but Bumblebee seems to be old enough not to be traumatized, come on
Megatron still searching Optimus, eh how many possibilitias have the Autobots to hide from him? and to hide especially Valour from other Autobots?
"a trip up the mountains"? are we already at the epidode "Nature calls"? or another one that, in this case, I don't remember, between "Along came a spider" and "Nature calls"?
Guest chapter 13 . 6/20/2013
Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
Kokua Aviatrix chapter 9 . 6/20/2013
Someone's playing matchmaker :D
Diamondstar the Seeker chapter 13 . 6/20/2013
If Prowl does something the hurts both of them then he will be on the list with Megafat and Starbitch or being kill slowly!
T-B-R chapter 13 . 6/20/2013
Great, those two finally had some 'fun', it was very well written as well, hope for another update soon.
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