|Reviews for Standing on the Edge of Forever|
| GracefulLikeAGazelle chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
I liked it. Merlin was pretty true to character, even if I do have trouble imagining him in quite that state of mind. But I'm sure it could happen. Good story.
| Nada Themis chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Just... amazing. Reading this whilst listening to 'How To Save A Life' by The Fray is just epic.
Loved it - such emotion. I think you did amazing at going indepth with how Merlin was feeling. And Arthur's consern was adroable.
| Luci-Marlena chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
i think i reviewed arthur's pov first but w/e
omg sooooo angsty
loved every minute.
i loved how you portrayed merlin's inner turmoil about being a warlock and wanting to understand just why the other man felt like he needed to jump/fall...
and every time he said "i wasn't going to jump" i could just feel that he wasn't trying to convince arthur but trying to convince himself...
whew... lots of ansgt and emotion... this really showed the depth of arthur's feelings for merlin (esp in HIS pov) which, i'm not going to lie, made me do a little happy dance.
anyways, i like how emotionally torn and raw this (and merlin) was.
| Thomson chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Very well written.
| Tony WildRiver chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Okay, I give. These should be faved. It's just too interesting of a reveal set and well-written to boot. If I come back to read it again for the third time, I think my subconscious is sending me a message. Make of that what you will.
| PissMeOffAndDie chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
That was so good O.o You write angst well. Now I'm off to read the sequel. I can't decide if I like your angst or your humor better. I love both
| Avalon chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
This has got to be one of my favorites that you have written. Just the sheer emotional intensity coupled with the fact that it's MERLIN we're talking about has me drawing a blank every time I want to describe this wonderful piece of work.
He internal monologue was something I could have seen myself thinking. The fact that it was just so easy to fall, along with everything he has seen, well I think anyone would get a little fearless up there.
And Arthur! Oh my gosh, I cannot explain how wonderful he was! He recognized that this was not a time to be teasing Merlin and that scene at the end where he grabbed Merlin's foot! Aiya I almost melted right then and there. (No I am not a Merthur fangirl, but I do like seeing their friendship. And you my dear has captured that perfectly!)
I don't think I could find any critique with this marvelous piece of writing you have given us readers.
Thank you so much for the wonderful bits of writing you spew out so wonderfully.
| Evil Squid chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Looooooove it. Wow. Awesome dialogue and friendshipy/loyalty themes... : D
| sarlovesoccer chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Can't wait to read for the sequal!
| Gabbable chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
wow... poor Merlin. I loved the story, very glad he didn't jump. This story was about something I wonder if Merlin's ever thought about.
By the way, love the profile picture!
| Angela-Bennet chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
OMG OMG. This is quite dark, you probably heard that before. but I'm loving it!
| AP chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Amazing. i only wish you had continued it but i know what it's like with one shot, when you end it you end it. Anyway it made me shiver, in a good way. great work!
| Emerald Harkness chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Wow, dark kinda story, but I love it. Nice ways of portraying the characters but not going to far away from the shows charaters.
| Haley Renee chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
Whoa. I'm so speechless right now. Good job.
| Alexagirlie chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
That was awesome
GOD do i want to read it from Arthur's point of view too XD