|Reviews for Haruhi's Diary Won't Lie|
| tau.soul chapter 10 . 3/8/2015
You should write their wedding/sex scene. Or if you're the kind of person that doesn't like writing that stuff, get someone else to. In your writing style. With the cool, choppy, simplistic lines that tell you everything without missing the details or going overboard. I'd love to see a lemon written like that. And it would work really well for KyoHaru.
| tau.soul chapter 6 . 3/8/2015
I really like your writing. It's simplistic, but in a good way. It really brings out the important things, and rather then spending five hours on Haruhi's dress, you spend that time developing your characters through engaging dialogue. Sometimes you could be a bit more descriptive, but overall you're amazing.
| breanna macias chapter 10 . 6/13/2013
i love it when the next one
| Mahasana chapter 10 . 4/29/2013
WOW me quede sin aliento... una historia muyyyyy genial.
| Mynameisaname chapter 10 . 2/5/2013
This was amazing (Though there were grammatical and spelling errors)XDD Kyoya is so SEXY
| AkiraNatsume chapter 10 . 7/15/2012
More chapters please!
| Animegirl721 chapter 10 . 6/13/2012
This was so good and I really enjoyed reading this.
| Lars chapter 2 . 10/21/2011
Wow, it's a big block of text. Thanks!
| AnonymousFan chapter 10 . 10/10/2011
| rayningnight chapter 6 . 9/7/2011
Awww, poor Mori...I really feel for him.
Even though he's sort of out of character.
Ah well doesn't matter.
Good story anyway!
| rayningnight chapter 2 . 9/7/2011
This seems interesting so far as I read! But maybe you should revise this chapter...and space it.
It's kinda hard to read if it's all stacked together in ONE PARAGRAPH.
Just sayin'. :)
| JT chapter 10 . 5/28/2011
It's kinda funny, the fact the both Kyoya and his father know what Haruhi is thinking. Continue the story it's really good!