Reviews for battlefield
colorful swirls chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
I loved this! :-) My favorite part was the last three lines. Amazing ending. I only found one fault - Teddy's middle name is Remus, not John. Other than that, it's perfect!

seaweedbrain213
a walk on the w i l d side chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
that was amy-zhie-Ing Rach, honestly.

brilliant, really&truly.

i love the formatting, it's beautifully done, and well-thought out.

i love the ending, although it was a little confusing-did Teddy really love Lily? or was that just her?

but it was good none-the-less, the words were well chosen, and it flowed really well.

kat
merdarkandtwisty chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
it was an ok story some thing I'd like to point out though one you make it seem like Teddy and lily are the same age when in fact Teddy is ten or Eleven years older then Lily two Teddy's middle name is Remus not John and three this could be anyone talking about Teddy Roxanne Lucy Vic anyone you need to be spacific.
LiVe.WrItE.LoVe.CoUrTnEy chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
That was AMAZING!

it was so awesome and this is now officially the best poem I have ever read and maybe even piece of literature! This is so amazing and you honestly have some natural talent in ou and I feel so cool to be friends with someone so talented! (:

Fantastic!

~Courtney(:
currents chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
/is in love with this freeverse

I'm not ashamed to get down on one name and propose to this story, y'know :D

/also has no shame and is frequently called recklessly sporadic ;)

I love it

I love it

I love it

:)

Keep writing :D:D

Love from,

Summer
Thisisarelativeplaneofexistanc chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
I love it.

Beautiful.

Keep writing.