|Reviews for Cataclysmic|
| shugosailormewmewz21 chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Wow, that story was good. There were no grammatical errors or punctuation mistakes from what I saw. And the story idea was fabulous. You captured and wrote the emotions perfectly without overdoing/exaggerating them like a lot of people tend to do. Well done I say, well done.
| ThereNBack chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Oh, my goodness! this is such a sad story but in the end its really bittersweet i guess? Really over all its a great story to grip at your heart.
| Burmad chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Great story it is so different than anything I've read before in a good way!
I hope you continue writing great fics
| serenity wayne chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
im usually not a fan of this pairing, but this was wonderful.
i didn't hate Sakura, its understandable the way she reacted, and she a teenager we cant expect her to know how to handle emotions, boys and kisses together.
| anticollision chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
wow. omigosh… i don’t like leesaku (even if it is onesided, pfft, whatever) at all. but this entire oneshot made me so sad. it has an underlying beauty in the sorrow—just like how you had shikamaru and kiba describe sakura and her sadness.
i must favorite this. and i'm usually picky about what i favorite, but… jeez… this was wonderful. write something like this again sometime. c; no, really
one more thing: i kind of think that this story would be under “Angst” as well. because it is heartrending. or maybe that’s just because i was listening to Something Corporate (which is a band) the entire time. whatever. ]
thank you for writing this.
| NuclearPandaGas chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
This was a loverly story and was written beautifully.
I felt sorry for both Lee and Sakura, but the ending wasn't necessarily sad.
Look forward to reading more of your stories
| Fantom Phreeke chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Okay, so when I got the email notification that you posted another story, I was really excited! But I couldn't get the time to read the new story until now, so here it is.
I really enjoyed the story.
The tone and voice of the story was very good. I liked the relaxed but intellegent language you had going on. And I really liked that you didn't make Sakura kiss Lee, because honestly, I do not want that mental image.
I did find it a bit challenging to follow th story as you skipped forward in time from chapter/part to part. Maybe if you added indicators that separated the portions, it would be easier to know when we move ahead in time.
I really liked this story and I think that it has some great lines that can be used in origional stories, too.
Thanks so much for the awesome post!
| domdom456789 chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
awwww! i usually dont like leesaku, but this was sooo sweet! great job!
| LittleFoxDemon chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
| LadyDream3512 chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
I would admit that I'm not a fan of LeeSaku, but I have to say that this is simply a beautiful piece. It moved me enough that I cried :) You are a wonderful writer and I look forward in reading more from you.
| Hitomi Star chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
That was very sweet :)
| einsodair chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Goodness, I'm crying and sniffling all at 8 in the morning. xD I never usually read LeexSakura fanfics especially since I'm an avid SasuSaku fan however this really was an amazing story. I love all the complexity of relations with Sakura and the ending with Sasuke. It was all very original and creative. Grammar was astounding and this is definitely one of the best oneshots. Great job and good luck on future works.
| cutecrazyice chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
It's lovely, Annie. :) Very heartbreaking, too.
| Pretty little One chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Wonderful. I love it, it's so beautifully simple and yet complex at the same time. Please continue writing such wonderful pieces!
Pretty little One
| lollipops suck chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
my gosh, wow. You just reinforced why I love reading fanfiction. And I'm kinda glad that you aren't a "better writer" as you put it - cause this is already perfect :)