Reviews for Step Off the Stage
nahte123456 chapter 1 . 3/14/2015
Well neither of them are right or wrong, but at least they realize that, but why doesn't Hilda do something, at the very least she could try to find N and talk about this, he's more likely to listen and understand than anyone else at least.
fleur-de-fey chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Wow. This was a really deep and profound fic. Aside from the few grammatical or spelling errors, this was a really good story. I loved all the parenthetical remarks sprinkled throughout the story and the metaphors you used, comparing them to actors, books, etc; it was all very poetic. This was great; keep up the good work!
The Light's Refrain chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
This was an interesting read. I like the chaotic and choppy flow of it that hints at what's beneath the surface.

So aside from some silly errors here and there, I like this.
Random Person chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
This is really good, you’ve made some good points and I like how different it is from any other Black & White fanfics I’ve read. Also, I found the last line funny.

On to less important things:

You've got some slight punctuation problems, especially when you use parentheses. A sentence in parentheses should still start with a capital letter and end in a punctuation mark. (Like this.) And it’s “too much”, not “to much”. Other than that you seem to be doing fine with spelling and grammar.
Roy's Little Girl chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Wow. Deep.