I have no idea why I waited so long to read this,once I started I couldn't stop loved everything about it thank you

She was a stupid stupid girl... i would love to smack her. Edward, there aren’t enough bad words I would like to use.

What can I even say after a story like that? This one will be on my mind for a long time, it's going to take awhile for another fic to stay with me like this one will.
Thank you so much for sharing.

Loved it!

Excellent story. Love this version of Edward and Bella. You have written such great characters. U can feel the passion between them in everything they do and don’t say. Thanks for writing.

Gah, I just read this story again. It's so painfully beautiful. So well done 3

Years later, and re-reading this story again after catching a vid on youtube that has always reminded me of this "Edward".

From the very 1st time I read this story particularly the "older Edward" has always appeared in mind as Morten from AHA, right around "Live-Aid in Berlin" show. Have no idea why that was the first image, as the music is completely dif genre, and synth, 8o's pop is def not a fav of mine, with exception of a few cult classics like this one...but anyway, since then every time I happen across "Take On Me" and its been awhile since I read this, I find myself back at FF and re-reading again.

Such Nostalgia, both from 80's and from height of Twilight days when I first discovered FF and found myself spending obscene amounts of time reading. I still spend way too much time with my nose glued to a screen reading something, but my family, I'm sure is glad I've reformed to at least a manageable level ;)

So a long winded ramble to say I love this story

So Bittersweet but so damn pretty. A gem, about live that transcends everything even ourselves and despite of ourselves.
Very creative writing style.
I am glad I spent a little bit of my life reading this.

That was stunning. I anticipated it from the second I read your summary, but I was blown away by the quality of your work and was enthralled by every word. Your writing sucked me in, and I was so grateful for it. I'm glad you tackled dark topics head-on; it made this fic fantastic. Thank you so much for writing it. There are no words to describe how much I appreciated this fic.

AMAZING! While reading this I already knew that I was going to read it again. At the begining I thougth that this was a tragic story and that it was ending on a very sad note, and I didn't want to go through that, but thankfully I decided to give it a shot.
I love the circumstances in wich they met, I love how it all starts. It really makes you apreciate how important words can be. If you remove Bella's wit and her extraordinary way around words, this story would have been a very different one, because it's through her words and the way her mind works that Edward truly noticed how beautiful and precious she is.
Truly sad for Jacob, I can't imagine what it must be like to be unable to own and love who you are.
I am so happy that I found this excelent story. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it with us. You're awesome.

I don't know if you are still out there. If you are, I must tell you what a fantastic story this is, and how incredibly well it was written. I laughed, cried, and worried for and with the characters. I have no idea why I waited so long to read it.

Thank you!

i just adored this!
I struggle with stories that go back and fore with time but this hooked me.
Thea, what a perfect name and so fitting.
This story hurt my heart, made my eyes weep... and made me happy.

Thank you x

Awwww sweet. Long road for those 2

Sigh

His daughter gets sick?