Present day: I'm just now reading this story and I can't put it down/close the screen. I need to sleep but can't help but turn the page/next for one more chapter. Thank you for writing. Now I understand all the reviews and favourites that follow TiaL for over a decade :)

Amei ameia amei demais
Essa história me prendeu do início ao fim
Há muito tempo uma fanfic não me angustia e deixa feliz assim

Fb BFF egg queen queen

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Loving this so much I'll see what other work there is

God, this was so good, and masterfully constructed. Yes, it took paying close attention to keep track of the timelines, but it was so much more intriguing than a linear telling of the story would have been. I had a variety of guesses throughout, some totally wrong, but happily so. I also love a story that recognizes that love and passion can be had even for people over 30, 40, and even 50 years old.

If you ever want to come back to this world, a companion piece about Seth and Jared would be cool.

It’s a big read and I loved every word thank you

Wow. This was amazing. So beautifully written. What a ride. At times, confusing. Specially at the beginning you know? Too many different timelines at the same time, so it was a bit hard to keep up. But it worked.

I've laughed and cried and got emotional. You are truly talented.

I do have this one "issue" with the plot though. For the life of me I just can't get into my mind that Seth is gay and they had sex twice. The first time? It makes a bit of sense, in the context, in the fact that he was not out of the closet, if u allow me saying. But the second? Alcohool? Grief? After the ultimatum Seth made? I mean, It just doesn't make sense. He is not bisexual. He is gay. How would it work? It blows my mind.

That being said, I really enjoyed this story. So thank you for sharing their journey. And their story lives. Thea was such a sweetheart. The cutest little one.

Xoxo

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This story is so confusing

This is so beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this.

Not gonna lie. My mind is all around the place trying to keep up with the dates BUT i gotta say this is a very wonderful story! My brain can keep up with the timeline. Lol!

I’m actually happy that he’s little one’s father. I kinda expected it from the get go so i’m not that surprised with the reveal. (Honestly, i’m more surprised that i ACTUALLY like the fact that he’s the father. Lol)

Wow... First thank you! This story is really awesome! Really well written and so much feelings...

Wow! This was fantastic. Tore my heart out, and then mended it, all in one story. Amazing writing. Thanks for sharing
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The fact that this was initially published back in 2011 makes this story even more special in my eyes. All those years and you manage to carefully craft and build this story into a masterpiece. This one blows my mind, no doubt about that. I'm going to try to say my thoughts as best as I can because I'm just so incredibly moved and touched by this story.

There are stories that pulls you in and takes you into its embrace that it almost feels like you're living through it all too, and that's what I felt like while I was reading this. It didn't felt like I was merely reading a fanfic, it felt like this happened in real life because the way you wrote it, the character's emotions, the pacing, the way you described life in the past and how different things were back then, the dynamics between the characters, the plot twists and mysteries, the way I can't stop anticipating what'll happen next, the jumping from past and present day, it felt like I was watching a movie and I experience it all unfold right in front of my eyes. That's how powerful your writing is! I feel incredibly lucky to have read this masterpiece because this is truly a story that is so worth publishing. Just WOW. I feel like a story like this would have reached up to 30/50 chapters but the fact that all these happened in just 23 chapters is just AMAZING. It felt like I've known the characters since forever and that I just looked through a person's history and discovered and learned things about them that made them the way they are towards the ending.

This is a story that makes you want to step back and reflect a lot of things in your life and looked back in the past and realize just how a person's life can change with just one significant shift in their life. How a person can reach their rock bottom and how it can affect the people around them. This story is just raw and honest and it doesn't try to satisfy the readers. It's just what is it and its up to us to digest and accept that that's what happened, and I love it. There's so many things that I can take away from this story, and the feeling while I was reading this is something that I can never forget. I love this imperfect Edward and Bella and how their love survived after years and years. Jake, Seth, and Bella's journey is an eventful one that would eventually turn into something that I never expected. What happened to Jake is something that crushed me and I wasn't ready the sadness that accompanied it. It's sad to let this story go but just like what's been said in the story: Life must go on, and I'll continue on with my life with this story's impact engraved within my being. Thank you so so much for this and for sharing your incredible talent. Sending so much love xo.