Reviews for The Morning Must Come
Kala Elric chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
Nice story. Great job.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
awwwwwwwwww
Izzy Saunders chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
ahhhhhh young love :)
Yaoifreak chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
OMG! : Fangirl squeel :XD plz write more fanfic!
Rooz990 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
nice
Abby chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
Looks like nice piece but needs some clean up. The sex is one giant paragraph that would be much easier to read if it were broken up a bit more. And then, take your time writing the sex. You can clearly add details, even more than you really need, by way the very beginning is written. But then once we get to some action, we go from kissing to oral teasing in about two or three lines. Try giving some more detail to Draco's actions, especially in between the more high profile moments.
Queen Starstruck chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Good, though it needs a spelling check, like with 'body's' (should be bodies), quite when it should be quiet. But other than that, a nice oneshot of delicious HD (high definition OR Harry/Draco, take your pick! XD) smut!
DarkFlameInfernal chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Nice