Reviews for More Than One Ridiculous
lifechiaroscuro chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Poor, poor Peter.

An interesting comparison, by the way, Susan and Rabadash.

~Caity :)
lost-in-elysium chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
This was great! I loved how close the Pevensies were in this story, and the humor made it even more enjoyable to read.

Haha! I find Peter and Edmund speaking up at the same time amusing. The same thing happens to me and my sister! And I was wondering if Wendy thought that Narnia was real, but I now know that she thinks it just something the Pevensies made up.

"Hold on, if you're telling the story, can I sit on your lap?" That was the funniest line in the entire story! I loved it. :D

If I were Susan or Lucy, I would have found that cute but a little awkward. I would probably be laughing if I walked into something like that, especially if it's two grown men we're talking about.

The ending was the best. It was well written, and I think the story flowed together nicely. I have nothing negative to say about it. Great job! :D
na-nilla-wafers chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Haha! This made me laugh! :]

Cute, if you ask me. Although, I don't see how it is under romance. It would be more of a family/humor genre. :]

Anywhoodles, I really liked it.

Lots of love,

Dr. Daniel Jackson Lover chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
I like this story allot! I do hope that you will write another chapter!