Reviews for Dark before the Dawn
Treedweller chapter 15 . 3/8/2020
Excellent writing, thank you!
Treedweller chapter 8 . 3/7/2020
Lol, shame on you for writing so darn well! I have work to do and sleep to catch on but all I want to do is read!
TheOriginalRhi chapter 15 . 1/24/2020
Wow that was a great story. You had me on the edge of my seat! Love how Qui and Obi were able to have that little bonding moment at the end.
Animekitty47 chapter 13 . 8/4/2019
Great job with this chapter! Well, it's all good, of course, but this one was even better than usual! :D
Animekitty47 chapter 6 . 8/1/2019
You did a great job with this scary chapter! How're they gonna get outta this mess?! So glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter to come out. XD
William Katner chapter 3 . 5/20/2018
Nooooo...Qui Gon! Also,poor Obi...oh,well. Good story,it could be better written tho.
silverleaf321 chapter 15 . 12/27/2016
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Cora chapter 15 . 4/11/2016
Well then...
Your next story will be fabulous, I'm sure. I'm excited to start it! Well, Wish me luck at getting over my emotional turmoil over this story, and getting through my history notes...
Cora, AKA BookGirlMusicNerd...
Cora slightly ok chapter 14 . 4/11/2016
Hmpf...
Well. More Bant. That's always a good thing. And they are finally on the road to getting better. And, they are on the mend, and such. I feel slightly better now. And Obi is alive, and so is Qui. And well...
Obi is in for some punishment...
Poor kid...
You are no longer hated...
Corawho is mad chapter 13 . 4/11/2016
YOU ARE DEAD TO ME!
WHY DID YOU MAKE ME CRY, AND RIP MY HEART OUT, AND MAKE ME THE NON-CYNIC I PRIDE MYSELF ON BEING! I KNOW THIS IS A PATH TO THE DARK SIDE, BUT DO I CARE? NO!
Okay...
I still hate you...
But great chapter...
Cora chapter 12 . 4/11/2016
Sadness...
So, you expect me to believe you would kill Obi? If you kill my child...
Anywho, I will actually go out and say this story has made me tear up, and yes, cry a bit. But still, can you expect me to sit stoically while Obi Wan is dying, and Qui Gon was heartbroken? I feel so bad for both of them...
Hate that you made me cry
Cora chapter 11 . 4/11/2016
DEFYING GRAVITY! I love Wicked!...
Anywho, wow. Dark...
So, we finally have the big ending, that feels rightfully epic, and was written in a perfect style. And I am impressed. When one has to kill off an antagonist, it usually ends up forced, and yet you managed to handle it with grace, and I felt the emotion radiating from the scene. The ending was tragic, and beautiful. And, really, it can get much worse...
I'm impressed...
Cora chapter 10 . 4/11/2016
Wow, okay...
Are you SURE that Sony isn't Ultron, with the "puppets on strings" thing?...
I knew it would come down to a confrontation! So, I feel like poor Qui Gon is actually going to go through with making Obi scrub Yoda's bedroom. And let's face it, that is not a happy task. Even though his hut in the movies was actually very well kept...
Loved the chapter!
Cora chapter 9 . 4/11/2016
Well then...
I find Sony's lack of faith in Obi Wan disturbing...
So, I'm assuming that Sony has no intention of freeing either. And some big climax is going to happen, when Qui Gon is rendered useless, and Obi Wan will prove his worth for the umpteenth time...
Am I right?...
Cora chapter 8 . 4/11/2016
Hehehe...
YAY! Tarin! Love him. 3
Anywho,
I was wondering, is Qui Gon really almost dead? Because here is what I think would be a cool plot twist; Qui Gon is alright, but captive, and Sony Da is baiting Obi Wan so he can have both of them see the torture, and possibly have them hurt each other.
Just my sick twisted brain...
Great chapter...
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