Reviews for Dark before the Dawn
silvereaf chapter 15 . 12/27/2016
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Cora chapter 15 . 4/11/2016
Well then...
Your next story will be fabulous, I'm sure. I'm excited to start it! Well, Wish me luck at getting over my emotional turmoil over this story, and getting through my history notes...
Cora, AKA BookGirlMusicNerd...
Cora slightly ok chapter 14 . 4/11/2016
Hmpf...
Well. More Bant. That's always a good thing. And they are finally on the road to getting better. And, they are on the mend, and such. I feel slightly better now. And Obi is alive, and so is Qui. And well...
Obi is in for some punishment...
Poor kid...
You are no longer hated...
Corawho is mad chapter 13 . 4/11/2016
YOU ARE DEAD TO ME!
WHY DID YOU MAKE ME CRY, AND RIP MY HEART OUT, AND MAKE ME THE NON-CYNIC I PRIDE MYSELF ON BEING! I KNOW THIS IS A PATH TO THE DARK SIDE, BUT DO I CARE? NO!
Okay...
I still hate you...
But great chapter...
Cora chapter 12 . 4/11/2016
Sadness...
So, you expect me to believe you would kill Obi? If you kill my child...
Anywho, I will actually go out and say this story has made me tear up, and yes, cry a bit. But still, can you expect me to sit stoically while Obi Wan is dying, and Qui Gon was heartbroken? I feel so bad for both of them...
Hate that you made me cry
Cora chapter 11 . 4/11/2016
DEFYING GRAVITY! I love Wicked!...
Anywho, wow. Dark...
So, we finally have the big ending, that feels rightfully epic, and was written in a perfect style. And I am impressed. When one has to kill off an antagonist, it usually ends up forced, and yet you managed to handle it with grace, and I felt the emotion radiating from the scene. The ending was tragic, and beautiful. And, really, it can get much worse...
I'm impressed...
Cora chapter 10 . 4/11/2016
Wow, okay...
Are you SURE that Sony isn't Ultron, with the "puppets on strings" thing?...
I knew it would come down to a confrontation! So, I feel like poor Qui Gon is actually going to go through with making Obi scrub Yoda's bedroom. And let's face it, that is not a happy task. Even though his hut in the movies was actually very well kept...
Loved the chapter!
Cora chapter 9 . 4/11/2016
Well then...
I find Sony's lack of faith in Obi Wan disturbing...
So, I'm assuming that Sony has no intention of freeing either. And some big climax is going to happen, when Qui Gon is rendered useless, and Obi Wan will prove his worth for the umpteenth time...
Am I right?...
Cora chapter 8 . 4/11/2016
Hehehe...
YAY! Tarin! Love him. 3
Anywho,
I was wondering, is Qui Gon really almost dead? Because here is what I think would be a cool plot twist; Qui Gon is alright, but captive, and Sony Da is baiting Obi Wan so he can have both of them see the torture, and possibly have them hurt each other.
Just my sick twisted brain...
Great chapter...
Cora chapter 7 . 4/11/2016
Happy birthday!
Well, not when I'm reading this, but...
Anywho, I'm just saying that if Obi goes and meditates with the great green one, he could, y'know, tell him without it seeming odd...
Cora chapter 6 . 4/11/2016
Hmm...
Seems like something Xanatos would do...
Are they working together?
I wouldn't put it past them...
Also, Where on earth is Xani?
I miss him...
FieryQueenOfAllSharpObjects chapter 15 . 7/28/2015
I absolutely loved this fanfiction! I really liked how Obi-Wan is so stubborn like Qui-Gon.
You're a very good writer and I'm loving this series so much!
Stormcutter684 chapter 15 . 12/14/2014
BEAUTIFUL! I love this story, drama, Obi and Qui angst, and a happy ending ... And Tarin! I like him.
*grins sheepishly* love your stories. They're amazing.
Selene467 chapter 15 . 8/6/2014
Oh yay love that sneak peak. Obi-Wan being the oldest padawan ,gonna be fun. He's going to have to step it up and show his wisdom as the oldest and sure as hell don't do anything reckless. So eager to read ti, gonna start today.

So about this chapter LOVE IT! Tarin Tarin Tarin! He's such a lovely character, I'm glad you managed to sneak him into this story a few times. And I adored the ending, Qui and Obi teasing each other, I can fele the love! Also I randomly thought if someone walked by and heard only snippets of their conversations they would be very confused, for example I imagined someone overhearing only Qui-Gon saying "Rocks Padawan," it would not make much senses and I can imagine sound very weird. What kind of conversation could two jedi have involving rocks XD

Maybe it's just my overactive mind at the moment, but it was funny in my head :P

Really lovely way to end this tumultuous story, I've enjoyed it a great deala nd I'm so glad I finally got around to finishing it. Now I can go read the enxt story which I know nothing about yet. Oh the excitement! Keep up the amazing work!

Greetz Selene467
Selene467 chapter 14 . 8/5/2014
Well I've finally caught up to where I suddenly dropped out of the galaxy. This is the first chapter that I hadn't read yet of this story and wow I'm such an idiot for getting distracted all that time ago. It's magnificent! So full of emotions, it's making me choke very nearly.

And seriously Qui-Gon?! Angry about Obi being reckless?! Where do you think he gets it from?! Who gives him those splendid examples of how to be utterly reckless?! Ok so yeah it's in Obi's nature a bit but Qui-Gon is partly to blame too and how can you NOT be reckless when the one person you love most in your life is in such terrible danger. As if Qui-Gon wouldn't have done the exact same had the roles been reversed.

Ah those two idiot Jedi. I love them to bits but they can be frustrating at times XD They better make it all better soon. I hate to see them so at odds and poor Obi is so distraught and feleing unworthy. I have heart aches, but in a good way. You know how to reach your readers that's for certain. There is no way I could have read this staying completely neutral and detached. Too much raw emotion! but I love it!

You're amazing!

Greetz Selene467
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