Reviews for To Not Be Apparent
Theblackbook chapter 8 . 11/22/2014
Theblackbook chapter 7 . 11/21/2014
TheBlueRoseWitch chapter 9 . 1/14/2014
This chapter was the bomb, and this is one of the best fanfics I have read in a loooooooooooooooong time. Please, I beg of you, don't abandon this story. I NEED more updates :(
Mashkai30 chapter 10 . 12/19/2013
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
fanster chapter 10 . 7/12/2013
It's been a while, but I hope you continue eventually! I'm curious as to what Dumbledore's real motive is, what Snape will do, and the reaction of Harry's friends.
fanster chapter 9 . 7/12/2013
Wow. This story is interesting and non-derivative which is rather rare. I feel like almost every fanfiction I have come across has another one just like it. Not the case here. Admittedly, I don't really look for stories with dark Harry and I usually don't like it when I find Dumbledore too dark that I feel he is OOC (I know he's manipulative, but some people portray him too extreme, but I don't feel you've done that here). And perhaps most importantly, the story is wonderfully written. I can't tell you how frustrating it is to find stories with good ideas, but so poorly written I can't even follow it because it's too painful to read. Keep up the good work.
Azera-v chapter 6 . 6/3/2013
Love this story, got to be the best with the idea of Harry going to Azkaban. Can't wait to hear more!
SuperSaiyanTeemo chapter 10 . 3/2/2013
Nice work, would like to see more
Hana-Liatris chapter 10 . 12/6/2012
This... this is just too awesome! You are bloody brilliant! I love Volds in this story, all dark, evil and i-n-t-e-l-i-g-e-n-t!

Hope you will cotinue your incredible work!
BlackPanther101 chapter 10 . 9/11/2012
Wow. This is awesome :D
But will Vodemort eventually turn Harry?

GinHanelle chapter 10 . 9/7/2012
Nonsense, this was beautiful. I love it so much. You have such a way with words. I honestly forgot that here where I am it is a hot day and not a chilly night near Azkaban lol and not some weird room with a fireplace. Aw, where's my fireplace...

Thank you!
Guest chapter 10 . 8/26/2012
well, that was exciting to read...
although I understand how hard it is when you are going to a university, just please don't take too long to update...
good luck:)
The Ultimate Ota chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
wow. This is so intense...poor dear Harry...but wow...

I just wanted to say thank you for reviewing my Snarry fanfic, "Unleashed." I've been banned/having log in problems somehow, so...just wanted to say thank you, alas I can't update the fic because I can't log in.

I've uploaded the fic and a couple more chapters at adult


TLJ110166 chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Harry didn't use his wand, when he cast those curses.
TLJ110166 chapter 10 . 7/4/2012
I'd love to see what happens, when the Order, and Harry's friends, find out what really happened to Harry, at the hands of Dumb-as-a-door and Fudgey...
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