Reviews for The Tale of a Displaced Monarch
Vi-Violence chapter 11 . 1/23
I'm honestly not sure what I think of the ending, but this is a very interesting fic.
MM chapter 11 . 9/20/2016
Love your ending. How you put Peter realizing his urpose in England.
Guest chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
I love it! And the ending was great too!
Guest chapter 8 . 4/28/2015
Lucy's line at the end is too much.
Other than that, it was good.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/28/2015
Nice job! Lu was great, and the kiddies cute. Edmund helped make the scene real.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/28/2015
Actually it works. Kids plot, Mom sees all, and... Oh. We're back to poor Helen.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/28/2015
I'm always a bit sad for Helen, missing raising her children.
Always fun to read the sibling banter!
Guest chapter 4 . 4/28/2015
I laughed at the story telling bit. Rabadash the frog!
Thanks.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/28/2015
Poem to Aslan: yes I noticed right away.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/28/2015
The Pevensies' culture shock and age mis-association in England is a favorite theme of mine.
Thanks for writing this.
1sunfun chapter 11 . 3/27/2015
Good.
Rajell Cellars chapter 11 . 3/3/2015
Love this story!
ADBSRDA-EDG chapter 3 . 9/20/2014
I did.
delicatelyglitterywriter chapter 11 . 3/4/2014
Aww...I love this story! I'm sad that it's over, but it's the prefect ending!
batfan7 chapter 11 . 5/20/2013
A fun and lovely story. Thanks for posting!
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