Reviews for Evanesce
Losalif08 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Cried real hard on this! REAL HARD!
ciel.hiiragi chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Loss at words, totally...
Too breathtakingggg!

Please just tell me if u're making continuation or sequel to this!
TheKittyRin chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
NOOOOOOO! Cheren, you idiot... :'(

I really, really, really loved it! Heh, you did great, as usual! :D

This was so great!

I really loved the way you wrote it out!

- Speech


Speech -

I don't know, it's really neat. Loved, loved this story by the way! :)

it's simply me chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
This was great! Second-person stories usually have this abstract effect, so that no matter what you write, or what the content, it always ends up seeming cool...and effective. So yeah, I enjoyed it!
lolol chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
I loved it. I was gonna cry. Hopefully I didn't. :P
zflame393 chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Engaging writing, I really like the use of second person.
aestheticisms chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Where the hell has this been hiding? I'm mean /seriously/. This was so wonderful, I don't even know.

I love the second person perspective. A very nice touch, and you work wonderfully with it. I like your characterization of Bianca, independent but a little shy. Just a tad. Oh, Cheren. YOU LOVE HER, SHUT UP AND STOP LYING. XD

Besides that, absolutely heartbreaking when he rejects her, kind of in a way because he lied and stuff and it's super vague and I'm like NO. XD

Anyways! Wonderful, as always~ :D

Lottie416 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
FINALLY... I've been searching for a CherenXBianca fic or so long now. And this one is just perfect. Now WHY DID YOU LIE CHEREN? Stupid him... Poor Bianca, she'll never learn the truth at this rate. T_T This fic was a nice break from all those... Horrible WhiteXN fics. I hate Ferriswheelshipping...

...Enough of my ranting. Great job XD
KeytoDestiny chapter 1 . 5/27/2011

Okay, let's see if I can accomplish your style of reviewing (well, a similar to form of it XDD).

(1) "What would the smartest guy have anything to do with the dumb blonde?" - *sniff* BIIIAAAANCAAAA GOSH DARN IT. TT. *glomps protectively*

(2) "Is he smiling at how stupid you seem right now? Is he insulting you?" - oh for pete's sake, Bianca. Of course he's not. He's Cheren. And he loves you. T~T

(3) Bianca, I think your stuttering is cute. Cheren thinks so too. *nods*

(4) CHEREN BLUSHING. HELL YEAH. Now why couldn't you confess back? -.-

(5) "Emotionally... you're okay. (You can only lie to yourself and everyone else for so long.)"


(6) My favorite part in the whole story is an angsty part~ no surprise, right? XDDD. Favorite line's: "He doesn't love you. Not like that." - that is pure beauty. TT

After that, is: "Instead, you begin to back away slowly, cautiously."

I just felt those two things really brought the emotion and feelings out of Bianca~ *sighs* X33

(7) Still love those freakin Wonderland references - perfect. X33

(8) Hugging Bianca again as he runs away with angsty thoughts. TT. Then hug Cheren, who was just a complete idiot... WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU LIE GOSH DARN IT. T_T



"Sorry if this suckksss" - AGAIN, MEEEGH. IT'S BEAUTIFUL. TT

Avoiding Cheren's name actually is good, and you probably did it subconsciously. The same was done for Bianca's name, too. Avoiding their names gives off a better feel within the story~

Gaah I love this. Cheren and Bianca love forever~ X333333

Keep it up, Ruth~! I'm on summer vacation now, teehee~ 8DD
touko1234567890 chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
LOVE IT! please do more on N x touko(white)
fooboo24 chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
I really loved this. Your writing here is great and flows very well. Great job, and spot on with the characters - Cheren was perfect. He reacted really realistically in this!
alienally chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
This is not sucky! This is frickin' amazing! Bianca's characterization is beautiful and humourous and vivid. The story itself is dynamic and I love how you handled. Excellent job!