Reviews for Potter and Mclain
Asteroth1 chapter 1 . 8/19
I really like the concept. Though I think this story is pretty much dead. I'll follow it just in case :)
unknownwolf1996 chapter 1 . 2/27
girlfriend would be good
Killeraction49 chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
I think you should make her harrys girlfriend, can't wait for the next chapter please update soon.
alexanderjohn.golveo chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
I like this story pls when is the next chapter ?
Oh and I'm voting for ember x harry just so you know
MasterShadowAssassin chapter 1 . 10/16/2013
i would like to see ember as harry's girlfriend because personally i cant see ember being a motherly figure. hope you update soon its been two years.
bookhugger98 chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
BreGurl23 chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Motherly Figure please :)
Hanzo of the Salamander 2.0 chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
I look forward to reading what happens next in your story

number 14-daxlyn chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
good story i hope more soon and ember should be harrys girlfreind maybe have harrys magic turn him half ghost can stay with her and the ghost powers be "the power he knows not"
Kyubi9 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
HI YA! Kyubi9 here saying I think either would work. You could also make two separate versions of the stories One with Harry dating Ember and one where she decides to act as his mother. Though I find the idea of Harry growing up and act like Ember funny. Well thats all I have to say and I hope you decide to update soon.

master chief 118 chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
i say girlfriend with a the crap harry went trough in his live he deserves someone who loves him

and who he will spend his entire live and afterlife with
Ninja Master chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Up date sooon! Harry x Ember pairing for sure!
Blood Brandy chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
I say girlfriend, have her put some rebellion into Harry.
aback chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
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