Reviews for Harry Potter, Rise From Dust |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You did that bad, man. 9 year ago? OMG. Hope you come back |
![]() ![]() ![]() the constant shifting of time is terrible |
![]() ![]() ![]() why are you gender swapping people? there's enough chicks already |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, such a jerk author you are. You have not only equated Lily as a unwed mother as well as parents and all others as equivalent of Dursleys. Not reading this shit, however promising the story may be. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really Enjoying this story, i am amazed at some of the reactions of some of the readers in regards to Harry and he’s parents. If that was me i would let them know that the relationship between them would be very strained at best. He has other people who care for him deeply and often show there love an afection for him. There may be a reason for them abanoning him but it still does not alter the fact he had to raise himself from the age of 4 or 5. Even Moony and Sirius completly forgot about him. Hope you come back to this. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I always go back to this story whenever Im in a mood for "Neglected Harry" fics, because by far this one is the best in that trope. Harry and Daniel's dynamic feels realistic, it's also fun to read espeacially when they work together. I love especially how Daniel has a personality, and is fairly likeable unlike most stories where the little brother (or sister) is just sum prick. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Started out great with a lot of potential but the feeling of being dragged out ruined it. Way too many unneeded details. It's makes it seem at times like you have no idea the direction to take the story and are more concerned with putting out the next update. A lot of good stuff tho. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shame this has been abandoned. I had a lot of different theories on how the story would play out and the many other things going on in this. I was also looking forward to seeing Harry get with his girls and the govlet of fire would have been well interesting. So much potential it's disappointing to see it forgotten |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ya might as well ditch this before reaching where you abandoned it, I truly detest you. Failing to complete a story before resolving a single thing about it. You literally made Harrys dying regret not giving his parents another chance only for him to immediately rescind that thought. A lot of the problems in this story comes down to how you think someone with his issues would react to their parents making an effort to bridge the gap when for all accounts you were pretty much completely wrong. Not to mention this stupid bullshit with the ancients and all the crap you kept adding because of them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not a fan of the excessive bullshit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite honestly I am never a fan of a Quidditch focus, to me it's just a game that really isn't that interesting. Truthfully what I want to see is harry get a harem or a relationship and start to reconnect with his parents. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One thing I am getting a little annoyed with is the whole thing about harry giving up seeking his parents affection. Sure he can consciously give up trying but he will always thirst for it and want it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What is truly brings the plot down is the fact that they themselves had zero control over their neglect. Honestly Merlin should have known this and explained it to Harry. Honestly given your choices fi you decide to have harry not reconcile with his parents then this will end in nothing but failure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It honestly seems like you've forced it all with some otherworldly creatures forcing her to not acknowledge her own son |