di rl kayanya hampir ga ada cowok yg temennya cwek semua kecuali dia boti,terus temen dekatnya selalu salting sma harry masa dia ga sadar kaya ga mungkin bgt ada org yg se clueless itu dan semua teman dekat ceweknya digoda semua, apakah ini harem?kalo iya uhhh males bgt dah

Very good

I enjoyed this story a lot. Seeing it finished would've been great, but thanks for sharing what you did. I did notice the English/grammar fell off a cliff the last chapter or two.

Yes!

I hope you decide to finish this story.

is it abandoned?

Darn, that Lockhart humiliation was truly hilarious. God, I cracked up real hard. XDDDD
;)) Y'know, full with the stomach-hurting laughter and all.

Wonderful ideas you get!

fuck you arsehole deverill lol

so all of the girls are cockblocking each other, that is hilarious.

if you ever pick this story back up, give it a rest with the 'Harry falls everytime he uses any form of magical travel' cliche. At this point in the story, it's getting old and it doesn't,make any sense to keep beating that particular dead horse.

Also, I think this arc with the 'super-dementor' is where you contracted such a debilitating case of writer's block that you haven't added to the story in a decade so it may be a good idea to go back and rethink the story from the beginning of season three... just a thought

I'm pretty sure it was the Bats' beater who hit Harry in the back of the head, not the Magpies.

Harry did not make a great showing in the chamber.

Is it really necessary to exaggerate the fanon stereotype that Harry has trouble with the Floo Network? He fell one time in C.o S and it was his first time traveling by fireplace, after that it was never mentioned that he had trouble staying on two feet after floo travel. Why every fanfic author insists on latching onto this cliché as comedic relief is a mystery to me.

I'm starting to think that English isn't your first language. Certain words you use are correct in a sense bit they aren't used in common English phrases.

When will you updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate?