Reviews for Unforgivable
Fat Cat chapter 3 . 8/20/2012
This is a stronger chapter than the first two. Chapter one captured Crouch's rage well but seemed cliche in parts. The writing in chapter two was weak but still engaging enough to keep reading. This is worth continuing, particularly if you focus more on your language use because your ideas are great.
wheresthewolf chapter 3 . 1/3/2012
:( Barty Crouch Sr's story is a sad and depressing one. Good story! I liked it a lot!
Evelyn of the Witch Hunt chapter 2 . 5/30/2011
You have no idea how much I'm crying. This is such a powerful story of love and hate. It's amazing. I'd say that it's enough to draw tears to even the most heartless person's eyes. And one question, is that the end? It isn't, is it? (please say no).
deathisthenextgreatadventure chapter 2 . 5/25/2011
This was amazing! Their characters are extremely well written and I could feel the love Crouch had for his wife and the anger for his son. Keep writing!