Reviews for berrynose and the raspberry rain
Saka D chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
Hahaha! Funny
LavenderCrystalOfRoses chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
XD XD XD XD XD I LOVED THIS I AM FAVORITING THIS XD :D
Lunara the Ara chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Good job!

But remember to use quotation marks when someone speaks. And make sure you make a new paragraph every time somthing new happens!
Mothstar chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
pure..randomness!
Pinkchibs chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Lol, I love it. Poor Yellowfang!

I also love the idea of a rhino falling from the sky a grumpy cat riding it!

It's just great