Reviews for The Persistence of Memory
ILoveBooks538 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
If I could, I'd like to borrow that first part for my story for school. I dunno if you made that up or not, but either way: it's beautiful, and it fits into my story perfectly. I'd love to include it in a place that I feel it was made for. It was a beautiful beginning, by the way. Simply amazing. I can't wait to read the waste.
learningtowrite1996 chapter 11 . 10/24/2011
Soooooo, this story is dead. Right? Its been years since you updated. Crap. I'm kinda in frikking love with it :(

Continue... please?
learningtowrite1996 chapter 3 . 10/24/2011
Dude! I flipping love this story!
Rori Potter chapter 11 . 10/22/2011
That was brilliant. Update soon.
G Wiz 13 chapter 11 . 10/2/2011
This story is brilliant! Please finish it! The characters are great :)
leira123 chapter 11 . 9/21/2011
NO! PLEASE UPDATE! God, i mean it! I'm hooked!
Guest chapter 11 . 9/19/2011
This story could be really cool. I wish you would come back to it! Of course, after this long I can see why you wouldn't...
LuMoS chapter 11 . 9/1/2011
Please don't abandon this! I personally wouldn't mind if you simplified/abandoned the long thingies at the beginning as long as you finish. ANYTHING IT TAKES. *gets on hands and knees* PLEEEEASE! T_T
Nauro chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
that was really engaging.

It's not quite alive at the moment, right?

Hope it will rise like a pheonix someday, it has loads of potential.
nonamemanga chapter 11 . 7/30/2011
Dear God this is amazing! I am shocked to say the least. I have never come across any story similar and this was by far the more engaging story I have read in quite so time. I hope this story is updated because I can not wait for the story to go on.
penname915 chapter 11 . 6/7/2011
Good job on the story so far. Wow, in this chapter Harry agrees to live with a questionably stable and responsible adult who he does not remember, partly because the guys life seems to be hinged on his answer. This hints at a certain disregard for his own safety (hasn't changed much from before) and compassion for others. Although the fact that he's friends with Will and all the kids at the orphanage love him should have hinted at abundant patience and caring compassion.

What's up with Harry running away? I mean yes Sirius is acting irrational and dangerous- but would it kill him to listen? Doesn't he have a bunch of questions for them? People are not going to react well to his injuries. I hope they can help him with magical remedies and treatment. What is Will hiding? How will Will react to Harry disapearing, I wonder.

Keep up the great work! Update! Please! Sooner than the last time.
A.KayIsAPenName chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Wow! I LOVE this! Please tell me you are planning on putting more up, because if you aren't, then I just might have to cry...
HollzHatter chapter 11 . 4/12/2011
I'm really hoping that this story wont fade into the ether of unfinished fanfics, but i guess It's too much to hope...PLEASE FINISH!

I love this story!
star.louw chapter 7 . 2/27/2011
Oh damn! I don't like Sirius anymore... Crazy git
star.louw chapter 6 . 2/27/2011
Jeez, this is confusing... I like it, though...

sirius has gone loopy!

i feel very . . . Odd with all the reviews. But whatever. I'M bored as hell and on the road
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