Reviews for The Persistence of Memory
LuMoS chapter 11 . 9/1/2011
Please don't abandon this! I personally wouldn't mind if you simplified/abandoned the long thingies at the beginning as long as you finish. ANYTHING IT TAKES. *gets on hands and knees* PLEEEEASE! T_T
Nauro chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
that was really engaging.

It's not quite alive at the moment, right?

Hope it will rise like a pheonix someday, it has loads of potential.
nonamemanga chapter 11 . 7/30/2011
Dear God this is amazing! I am shocked to say the least. I have never come across any story similar and this was by far the more engaging story I have read in quite so time. I hope this story is updated because I can not wait for the story to go on.
penname915 chapter 11 . 6/7/2011
Good job on the story so far. Wow, in this chapter Harry agrees to live with a questionably stable and responsible adult who he does not remember, partly because the guys life seems to be hinged on his answer. This hints at a certain disregard for his own safety (hasn't changed much from before) and compassion for others. Although the fact that he's friends with Will and all the kids at the orphanage love him should have hinted at abundant patience and caring compassion.

What's up with Harry running away? I mean yes Sirius is acting irrational and dangerous- but would it kill him to listen? Doesn't he have a bunch of questions for them? People are not going to react well to his injuries. I hope they can help him with magical remedies and treatment. What is Will hiding? How will Will react to Harry disapearing, I wonder.

Keep up the great work! Update! Please! Sooner than the last time.
A.KayIsAPenName chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Wow! I LOVE this! Please tell me you are planning on putting more up, because if you aren't, then I just might have to cry...
HollzHatter chapter 11 . 4/12/2011
I'm really hoping that this story wont fade into the ether of unfinished fanfics, but i guess It's too much to hope...PLEASE FINISH!

I love this story!
star.louw chapter 7 . 2/27/2011
Oh damn! I don't like Sirius anymore... Crazy git
star.louw chapter 6 . 2/27/2011
Jeez, this is confusing... I like it, though...

sirius has gone loopy!

i feel very . . . Odd with all the reviews. But whatever. I'M bored as hell and on the road
star.louw chapter 5 . 2/27/2011
OoOoOoH!
star.louw chapter 4 . 2/27/2011
Wow, Padfoot's gone completely mad
star.louw chapter 3 . 2/27/2011
Poor Sirius an Lupin
star.louw chapter 2 . 2/27/2011
Ooh cliffy!
star.louw chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
I know it's probably pointl ess...but I'm going to review every chapter... Simply because I like it, and it'll be the first time I'm doing it... Oh well... This is awesome!

xxx
Kisa Black chapter 11 . 2/10/2011
CONTUNIE !
Moon Ecstasy chapter 11 . 2/7/2011
I'm left speechless in the face of an awesome story. Seriously! I've never read a story with an amnesic!Harry before, it's very interesting.

Cheers!
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