Reviews for Hidden Minutes
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
That was kind of...meh?
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
This is so sweet, so painful. Do they get together? We hope so, everything seems so sad.
Crisely chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Your outtake fits in the story well, but I was hoping to re-read the full story. I was bummed when I learned it was no longer here. Do u know where I can find it?
LexiJBlack chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
You ever get that feeling (only if your a huge twihard like me ;) ) , you know you heart clenches and hurt/pain runs through your veins, that's what I got from this story, really, really, good story BellaBB, ANOTHER GREAT STORY! 3 FAVORITE!
kirstyvega chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Awesome outake! I love the original story and you've captured how both Jake & Bells must feel perfectly, it's a seemless blend with the original! Nice work. Any more planned?
jharv241 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Loved the drabble, because I love the story. Excellent job!
tunde-tre chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
I'm sad but I admit it:I almost skipped reading this drabble. EWM is marked and ready to be read but I was afraid of the heart-fail (I have enough of that in RL) and if this is a sample of it ...IDK if I can handle it.

Excellent writing cos it provoked those feelings in me (and not only in me,I presume) and powerful reaction, too. The portrayal of feeling broken, hurt and regret all at the same time for both of J and was beautifully heart-wrenching. *wipes a tear away*
grrlinterrupted chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
This is so beautiful... I'd love you to write a few more outtakes - perhaps of the kiss on the doorstep from Jacob's perspective? Amazing writing, though, even if there's no plans for more. :)
It's a Jacob Thing chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
nice insight...
i'm in the looney bin chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
love the spin off

really captures the emotion! :)

more on the way? ;)
niamhg chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
wow girl that was amazing! I love this story and the way you captured how broken and hurt and how desperately they both need each other! hugs!
PBF chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
I told you already, but it bears repeating: I loved this!

The way you characterized the broken-ness of both characters, the regret of Bella, and the pain of Jake, was amazing.
AliMariexxx chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Wow heart wrenching! I love Every Waking Minute it's such a great story and this is a wonderful emotional drabble... x
wordslinger chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
That was just amazing. I love Every Waking Minute so much. And I love you more than my pillow.
Storm Cascade chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
I suck at writing reviews but here goes...

"And even though I know it was her choice, her decision, that took her away from me, I can't help but blame myself." - made my eyes prick with tears and my heart involuntarily do this big jump in anguish for of a great writer when they can make you physically reacted to your story!...lucky the cat wasn't nearby or else i may have accidentally kicked it over the wait.. i don't have a cat *grin*

My heart aches for Jake, and for Bella. It felt like I was holding my breath the whole time...*gasps for air* ;)

Love how you broke it up into moments to compliment fewerbrokenpieces' Every Waking Minute - it works sooo well. Very clever!

Never doubt your mad skillz your work ...awesome ...totally awesome! I'm off to catch my breath and cry!
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