Reviews for Adding The Missing Piece
andysanime chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Ha-ha Itachi, the master manipulator eveeryone! XD
Aaron-TheStarfire-Turk chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
yum an uchiha sandwich with a naruto filling best mental image ever
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Something was missing for me in this story. It had a "missing piece," I guess you could say. I think the whole problem was Itachi. All the feelings were on Naruto and Sasuke's side.

I'm unconvinced Naruto would have ever agreed to go out on a date with Itachi when he didn't know him very well, and when he was in love with Itachi's little brother. (If you want to move on from someone, dating a close family member is not the way to move on!) Sure, Naruto said he knew it probably wasn't a good idea to try and move on from one brother to the other, but he dismissed that objection too quickly. I think Naruto would have had A LOT more reservations about accepting Itachi's offer than that, and I doubt he would have given up on Sasuke so easily knowing how stubborn he is. He would have needed a REALLY good reason to give up, and Sasuke rejecting him wasn't one. Canon Naruto has been rejected by Sasuke so many times but he keeps right on chasing him. I just didn't buy it in the end when Naruto decided in was "in love with the bastards" [plural]. With Itachi, too? He'd JUST agreed to a first date with Itachi! When did the love develop?

And then there's Itachi who barely knew Naruto. Just because Sasuke had taken an interest in him didn't mean that Itachi would feel the same way. How could he really be sure that Naruto would be "the missing piece" to his relationship with Sasuke if it had stopped working? And how could he be sure Naruto would have no problem with an incestuous threesome? Sasuke was quite reasonable when he said he could never tell him about Itachi because they were brothers. Most people would have had a problem with it, actually. There was no way for Itachi, who really didn't know Naruto, to have been able to predict that he'd have no problem with either incest or polyamory.

Yes, I know it's PWP fic and I shouldn't think so hard about it, but it's hard to enjoy the fic when I find the scenario unbelievable from the start. If the premise of the fic had been simpler, like Naruto had met Sasuke and Itachi on a poly dating site (where the brothers had gone hoping to find their missing piece) and they'd gotten to know one another as a 3P before the sex happened, it would have made more sense.
XXxliaaxXX chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
This story is really great. I love Itachi Sasuke Naruto threesome pairings. You should make it onto a story. Love it.
Mizuki Inuzuka chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Loved it!
ohmyotps chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
WoW! That was pretty amazing smut! Thank you!
edy-chan chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
**nosebleed** I really, really LOVED IT! I think I may have read a little bit too much of your stories, I have too much perverted images in my head of three naked geourges guys going at it like rabbits! *.* I love this trio a lot, and your plots are simple and short but always interesting with a happy finale in form of hot manly sex *insert drool xDD*

A question if I may? Is it just me or are there a lot more crazy yaoi addicts which are very healthy (not so sure about that)heterosexual females? xDD Sometimes I feel like some kind of perverted old geezer giggling madly while reading yaoi stories xDD I think I need teraphy :D
MelanisticLeopard chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
Nice... that had everything. All of the emotions were there.

I liked it! Great XD

Very nice smut scene!

There was just one thing. Itachi. He ended up seeming pretty devoted to Naruto, just as much as he is to Sasuke... BUT ITACHI BARELY KNEW NARUTO.

I think it could've used one more read-through! :)
Ami Uchiha chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Wow...it even has fluffiness at the end. Hot beyond belief and sweet as well.
Jamaican Princess Rocquellan chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
I really like this! thanks :)
TheaBlackthorn chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Devilishly delicious!
Ruka-x3 chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
I think I'm about to die.

Yep.

I'm pretty sure I am.

...

THAT WAS SO HOT OH MY GOD.
Pomporin300 chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
It's great as always!

XD
IloveSebastian16 chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
WOW! That was amazing! I read all your other NarutoxSasukeXItachi stories and this one is just as awesome as they were! Just perfect amount of smut! Its also awesome to know how they all started loving each other. You are such a fantastic writer! _ I'm always so excited to read your stories.
richon chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
hohoho it's so hot, love the threesome narusausita... i had a great time reading it thank you
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