Reviews for Harry Potter and the Alteran Legacy
Guest chapter 3 . 6/19
so...basically never removed then? k got it.
ScarletRainbow1 chapter 3 . 1/6/2016
I enjoyed this. Please, are you going to continue the story?
ASTRALGEEK chapter 3 . 6/17/2015
This has no been updated since Jan. 14 2013. Will you update futher?
SilverWolf1963 chapter 3 . 5/24/2014
Have you abandoned this story?
WhiteElfElder chapter 3 . 1/3/2014
Interesting so far. I wonder if the information dump would unlock any extra abilities within Harry other than the knowledge and skills with technology?
WhiteElfElder chapter 2 . 1/3/2014
Welcome Alice, to Wonderland!
Artur Hawkwing1 chapter 3 . 11/17/2013
Hope you havn't abandoned this fic yet. looking forward to more. Your fast approaching the one year mark.
powermachine79 chapter 3 . 5/10/2013
Well didn't see many faults with ch 2 but u are the author so i won't argue looking forward to reading more soon :)
Arthorius chapter 3 . 4/18/2013
Interesting premise, but seems a little too rush and harry is way too young to know adult stuff, common mistakes among fanfic crossovers is making harry to mature and adult like which leads to abandon storylines...

Storyline does have some potential but needs to avoid lot of pitfalls that can crop up when writing a crossover.
sdoyle1989 chapter 3 . 4/12/2013
well heres an idea how about hermione get th brain download too then well i dont know but keep it up it is great!
sdoyle1989 chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
great story keep it up!
Mythrandir chapter 2 . 4/3/2013
Its a nice story,

But harry is far to trusting to some people, to ollivander he is like i cant tell you is a top secret and stuff. Just with a material, with cover up could be from a meteorite.

To hermoine (complete stranger, where are the parents bye the way?) come on i show you alien stuff of the most advanced race ever. It doesnt add up one way or another. And hermoine is far to trusting..

The base idea is nice but the end package isnt realy good. I hope you are able to improve the story, maybe rewrite the chapter?

I hope you can do something with the tips :)
Guest chapter 2 . 1/31/2013
You've got an awesome story.
You've got some mistakes. You have got misplaced words, missing words, and extra words and misspelled/misused words.
Example: you often put with to when you mean with.
Also you use your instead of you're. If you are trying to say You Are, the proper contraction is you're.
Their is ownership and never conveys location
There is location and never conveys ownership
They're is they are, and never conveys ownership or location.
hpotter90 chapter 2 . 1/30/2013
I like the meeting Harry had with Hermione. Is this story going to pair Hermione with Harry? Also a suggestion, what if Harry met two ascended beings that turned out to be his parents.
ViolatedMonkey chapter 3 . 1/30/2013
You ahould make it so that harry creates another persona. This persona is going to be taking over the wiazarding world not just england. When harry turns 18 he is going to assume emperor ship over the wizarding world. He then uses atlantis to pick up the entirety of the wizardind world and transport it to an eden type planet. There he would re educate his people into the civilization of alterran. Before he does this he will with the help of zpms place a time dilation on the solar system. This way after 10,000 years his civilization of 100 trillion members will start colonizing other planets and taking over the galaxy the wraith are apart of. He uses his tech to destroy the wraith pretty quickly. Make it so that there are no humans in this galaxy and the wraith feed off humans on the outskirts of the milky way galaxy. After defeating the wraith he makes huge mega structures like the ring and ark of hAlo, more city ships, huge battle/carrier ships. And a personal dreadnought that is pretty powerfull. You should then with everything of this done talk to the asgards. This should take place right before the meeting of guald , humans and asgard about the treAty. ( all magical animals should have been moved to the new galaxy so nothing on earth can be found from alterrans past.) the alterrans and harry should be immortal and an average height of 7 feet just to differentiate with humans. Everyone should be able to do wandless magic and interface with computers like that. Weapons should be hard light with hard light shielding.
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