|Reviews for Lord Over the Night Sky|
| Kithrin chapter 113 . 3/9
technically there are only 2 of the same person, Zwei is at MOST a clone of the original reinforce, a modified one at that.
| zanthian123 chapter 48 . 2/13
final fantasy VII Zack Fair
| Fast Frank chapter 69 . 1/21
It seems from the sense of his reasoning, that Albus has concluded that Harry is Tom's new vessel, not vassel.
| Fast Frank chapter 68 . 1/21
What happened to the Horcrux that was in canon, Nagini?
| Fast Frank chapter 24 . 1/21
Piqued, darn it!
| davycrockett100 chapter 114 . 12/11/2013
| Tsume28 chapter 9 . 9/4/2013
I read halfway through chapter nine before I had to stop.
This is a great *script* for an actual story, but a poor story by itself. What you have now works more like an outline; the characters are still two-dimensional and uninteresting, and the reader can easily tell you're feeling your way around them.
Some examples from chapter nine:
The "great and Most Noble" Draco Malfoy would never start two different sentences with 'Ah' unless it's to make a point, it's uncouth and he has had speech lessons for years to learn not to.
His mother wouldn't talk about buttering up prospective allies in front of them like this, she'd give her son a pointed *look* and Draco would recall the years of lessons from *both* parents on politicking.
And so on.
You have a great premise here with the crossover, but you're going to need to put in some work in order to have a great story.
Good Luck and peace out!
| Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 114 . 8/15/2013
| SonicAnime2010 chapter 114 . 8/8/2013
OMAKES! OMG OMG OMG! LOL! LOVE THIS! Ohhhh these were just too damn funny.. twins sporting the same look, raking havoc.. neighbors in jail, getting a little catfight, oh boy oh boy funny
| Sandstone Dragon chapter 114 . 8/8/2013
Wow! this was an amazing story. It feels like the story is short some how, but I am looking forward to nine points. Hopefully it will be as amazing as this one, and even longer. Now I need to find more stories to read to pass the time... Any suggestions?
| MWkillkenny84 chapter 114 . 8/8/2013
And I think Dumbles' presence will make Jail LESS insane, not more!
| OBSERVER01 chapter 114 . 8/8/2013
| MMC chapter 114 . 8/7/2013
Funny Omakes, please continue the actual story soon.
| lordamnesia chapter 114 . 8/7/2013
Ah, the end of an era! I remember reading this when it first started! An incredible reason for the crossover, you cant beat it! This story is still the most comprehensive HP/Nanoha crossover out there, and imo the best! Keep up the awesome work!
| ultima-owner chapter 114 . 8/7/2013
Umbridge is lower than the bottom of the food chain