|Reviews for Lord Over the Night Sky|
| DalkonCledwin chapter 5 . 9/17
Just going to point out that Albus could have used Legilimency to determine exactly which orphanage Vernon left Harry with, and from there it is just a matter of following the paper trail.
How does Albus not know how the envelopes are addressed? He did deal with that as Deputy Headmaster did he not? Though I do wonder why it is the Deputy Headmaster who handles the addressing of envelopes… Also, I’m fairly sure Hermione Granger invented the Four-Point spell during the 1994-1995 School Year…
That’s another thing… if an Owl can find a student… surely a Phoenix can too… Albus is being painted as a very stupid individual right now.
Japan has a school for magic… it is even older than Hogwarts in fact…
I can only assume the massive magic powered fight that the Chinese member is referring to happening over the ocean between Japan and China (which I believe is on the wrong side of Japan as Uminari is part of Tokyo).
| DalkonCledwin chapter 3 . 9/17
Well Chrono is taking this better than he normally does.
| DalkonCledwin chapter 2 . 9/17
Hayate is one of the Queen's of Cosplay, right alongside Chiho from Sekirei. It isn't at all surprising she is trying to get someone to wear a costume.
| raigalcc chapter 52 . 12/20/2015
either getting hammer got get split in 2 lol
| raigalcc chapter 51 . 12/20/2015
DUMBLEDORE! seriously?! madam prince is gonna tear him apart lol
| raigalcc chapter 24 . 12/19/2015
simple, mr Severus, dun let nanoha anywhere near the cauldron lol XD
| raigalcc chapter 22 . 12/19/2015
woah ho, so Heromoine got herself a belkan device sweet~
| raigalcc chapter 14 . 12/18/2015
Oh no, Hayate's crusade is growing!
| yukicrewger2 chapter 12 . 11/12/2015
ok, actually I'm pretty sure all anime females know that spell Vita used. Konoka Konoe also uses that spell. despite not "knowing" about magic
| galbatorix123 chapter 4 . 4/18/2015
Hi, first nice story.
Then some small things with the german translation. "[Tragen Sie neuen Namen ein.]" it is not completely wrong ("Tragen sie einen neuen Namen ein"), but even better is "Neuen Namen eintragen" (it's more smooth in this case).
Then there is [Name hat angenommen, ruft bitte mich Reinforce ab jetzt.] in the first part (before the comma) is the order of the words wrong. The correct order is [Hat Namen angenommen, ...] or without auxiliary [Name angenommen, ...]/[Name akzeptiert, ...] .
To the second pard of the sentence. To the word order [..., ruft bitte mich Reinforce ab jetzt.] is wrong, correct is [..., ruft mich bitte Reinforce ab jetzt] or [..., bitte ruft mich Reinforce ab jetzt.].
More smooth is [..., bitte ruft mich ab jetzt Reinforce.]
Then ther is the issue to who the device responds. With [..., bitte ruft mich Reinforce ab jetzt.] the device speak to all people in the room (meaning plural). But the device responds to the master (to Harry (singular)) so not [... ruft ...] but without the 't' [... ruf ...].
Then the verb itself. Yes ther is something like 'Rufname' (firstname or callname) and [ruf] is not wrong, but it is not really used in this context anymore. Better is the verb [nennen].
So the complete, correct and up to date response to Harry is something like [Name akzeptiert, bitte nenn mich ab jetzt Reinforce.] (or when it adresses all people in the room and not only Harry 'Name akzeptiert, bitte nennt mich ab jetzt Reinforce.').
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 32 . 3/20/2015
well, its obvious you wanna power up more HP characters...
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 9 . 3/20/2015
great, stuck with Hermione again...
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 7 . 3/20/2015
umm, Reinforces hair is Silver and so why did Harry have Blonde hair when using Unison? it should have gone Silver
not to bad i guess... though everything is moving very fast, i guess you just rushing to get Hogwarts maybe?
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 5 . 3/20/2015
bahaha, Harry, Nanoha, Fate and Hayate will trash all of Hogwarts with ease...
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 2 . 3/19/2015
huh, Vita and the other knights have no reason to get dressed up as she isn't there master (unless Harry gets them to do it)
poor Hayate don't have her own dress up dolls