Reviews for Lord Over the Night Sky
raigalcc chapter 52 . 12/20/2015
either getting hammer got get split in 2 lol
raigalcc chapter 51 . 12/20/2015
DUMBLEDORE! seriously?! madam prince is gonna tear him apart lol
raigalcc chapter 24 . 12/19/2015
simple, mr Severus, dun let nanoha anywhere near the cauldron lol XD
raigalcc chapter 22 . 12/19/2015
woah ho, so Heromoine got herself a belkan device sweet~
raigalcc chapter 14 . 12/18/2015
Oh no, Hayate's crusade is growing!
yukicrewger2 chapter 12 . 11/12/2015
ok, actually I'm pretty sure all anime females know that spell Vita used. Konoka Konoe also uses that spell. despite not "knowing" about magic
galbatorix123 chapter 4 . 4/18/2015
Hi, first nice story.
Then some small things with the german translation. "[Tragen Sie neuen Namen ein.]" it is not completely wrong ("Tragen sie einen neuen Namen ein"), but even better is "Neuen Namen eintragen" (it's more smooth in this case).
Then there is [Name hat angenommen, ruft bitte mich Reinforce ab jetzt.] in the first part (before the comma) is the order of the words wrong. The correct order is [Hat Namen angenommen, ...] or without auxiliary [Name angenommen, ...]/[Name akzeptiert, ...] .
To the second pard of the sentence. To the word order [..., ruft bitte mich Reinforce ab jetzt.] is wrong, correct is [..., ruft mich bitte Reinforce ab jetzt] or [..., bitte ruft mich Reinforce ab jetzt.].
More smooth is [..., bitte ruft mich ab jetzt Reinforce.]
Then ther is the issue to who the device responds. With [..., bitte ruft mich Reinforce ab jetzt.] the device speak to all people in the room (meaning plural). But the device responds to the master (to Harry (singular)) so not [... ruft ...] but without the 't' [... ruf ...].
Then the verb itself. Yes ther is something like 'Rufname' (firstname or callname) and [ruf] is not wrong, but it is not really used in this context anymore. Better is the verb [nennen].
So the complete, correct and up to date response to Harry is something like [Name akzeptiert, bitte nenn mich ab jetzt Reinforce.] (or when it adresses all people in the room and not only Harry 'Name akzeptiert, bitte nennt mich ab jetzt Reinforce.').
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 32 . 3/20/2015
well, its obvious you wanna power up more HP characters...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 9 . 3/20/2015
great, stuck with Hermione again...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 7 . 3/20/2015
umm, Reinforces hair is Silver and so why did Harry have Blonde hair when using Unison? it should have gone Silver

not to bad i guess... though everything is moving very fast, i guess you just rushing to get Hogwarts maybe?
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 5 . 3/20/2015
bahaha, Harry, Nanoha, Fate and Hayate will trash all of Hogwarts with ease...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 2 . 3/19/2015
huh, Vita and the other knights have no reason to get dressed up as she isn't there master (unless Harry gets them to do it)

poor Hayate don't have her own dress up dolls
eliteshadow chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
nice chapter please update soon!
Cemalidor chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
Yup, to few pieces i saw of Nanoha i also wondered why the devices were talking german. :) Guess they thought it would be cool/funny.
TehShadowKitten chapter 113 . 4/29/2014
damn this was a great story, well written and worded and a great plot.
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