Reviews for When everything is said and done,
Alec'sbaby1 chapter 14 . 8/25/2013
Omg I love this story. Will Bella and Jasper have a kid like in breaking dawn. Will u update soon. Will u update soon. Please I need answers. So PLZ update soon. Plz
Olivia Williams chapter 14 . 10/7/2012
i hope bella lets fly with the hard truth to the cullens
Regin chapter 14 . 7/13/2012
I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!
city bookworm chapter 14 . 3/25/2012
Your Bella is strong enough for Jasper, she seems to be the only one who can take all of him. Including his scars both the physical ones and the mental ones. I love that the human is the one that stopped the fight. I think that Bella and Tanya could end up friends if they are given a chance. How about Bella setting up Tanya with Riley. It could work. I knew that she still loves Carlisle and Esme as her 'parents',its just under alot of hurt. She hasn't said how Charlie died nor how she met Riley or what happened with Victoria yet. I look forward to reading more.
Babysis64 chapter 14 . 3/22/2012
oh yes this was a good chapter and to me Carlisle and the rest of the family has no rights to know about Bella and Jasper how they got together and what not they lost that right when they booted Jasper out and left Bella to defend for herself but that just made her a stronger person and like Rosalie said she is better now then before Bella has a back bone on her instead of the weak person she once was.
Babysis64 chapter 11 . 3/21/2012
yes i do believe that Edward deserved everything that he got for forcing Bella into something that she didn't want and i am glad that Rosalie and Bella are very good friends awe just let Edward find his true mate like Jasper and Bella got the chance cause when you said they felt the spark go through their bodies isn't that the sign of true mate or soul mates i liked it when Edward and Bella got to talk one more time and this time Edward actually listened that is good and for Bella sticking to her ground of thought proud of her like Jasper said
Babysis64 chapter 9 . 3/21/2012
Bella should tell him off and tell him what for then tell him that she isn't in love with him anymore and that she wants to try with Jasper and besides Edward is too controlling towards Bella it is silly the way he treats her and Bella needs someone to treat her as a equal yep she does
Babysis64 chapter 7 . 3/21/2012
i think that Bella is right that she is not a possession but a person also Edward has not rights like Jasper said he through that away long time ago he through Bella away along time ago and how dare Edward call Jasper brother considering he disowned him along time ago in Forks and how dare Edward keep contact with the numbers that Bella had that is not his concern at all no it isn't
Babysis64 chapter 5 . 3/21/2012
i bet it was tanya that phoned the cullen's to let them know where Bella was yep i really do think so and they have no rights to bug her at all i hope they quit
Babysis64 chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
good thing that Jasper was there to save Bella's life and i wonder why he was there was he keeping an eye on her or something i guess i got to read on to find out huh
HisSecretLover18 chapter 14 . 3/3/2012
What's going to happen next? Are you going to have Peter and Charlotte in this story? Will Alice try to get Jasper back? How did Charlie die? Was Bella ever friends with Jake? Is Victoria after her in this? I hope you update soon please.
NatalieLynn chapter 14 . 1/31/2012
Best line in the chapter? Jasper's - "At least, all his sane children." That thought flitting through his head had me laughing right along with Edward. I sure hope Bella has Jasper change her soon. Every chapter lately, someone is trying to kill her. Anyway, Alice & Tanya's cat fight was kind of entertaining, especially when human Bella was the one that ended it with that whistle of hers. Alice really is nuts. I can't blame Jasper for needing to take his mate and claim her after all the peril she was in between this chapter and last. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
NatalieLynn chapter 13 . 1/31/2012
Honestly, I do feel kind of sorry for Tanya. Alice on the other hand, her I expect to go flying into the nearest clump of trees as soon as Jasper can rip her off of him. :)
NatalieLynn chapter 12 . 1/31/2012
I would not have guessed it was your first lemon had you not told us so. It was very nicely done. I did half expect her to tell him the house was to damn big, especially when it comes time to clean it. :) I can't even guess what stick Tanya has up her butt now...
NatalieLynn chapter 11 . 1/31/2012
Really nice chapter! The ending scenes with Edward reading, I assume, the "I love you"'s in Jasper's mind, conceding defeat, then Bella finally getting her points through his thick skull and his making up with his brothers...It was all very nicely written. Of course, I really loved the whole date, especially the game of 20 Questions. :)
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