|Reviews for Not On Three|
| WeatherWatch chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
OH MY GOSH. I'm buzzing. Is that normal?
I absolutely adore this series; your Tom, your Hermione, everything! I'm almost surprised he died/Hermione killed him. that's a wee bit unusual in your writing, but then these ones were always a little bit different - darker, very appropriate and fitting with canon.
Brilliant choice in having him desire to duel Hermione. I was like, ooh! And, honestly, the entire of the interaction had me leaning in towards my computer trying to read it as fast as I could because I had to know what happened next... then I had to read it again to actually absorb it properly...:P
Teasing Voldemort is also kind of awesome... so very Tom, who we all know we prefer by a million miles. Two of my favourites: "You used to be fun" and "Oh Harry, if only you knew what Hermione and I got up to, back in my day."
From Hermione I had a bit of a gigglefest at her Imperiused statement "I haven't got any vol-au-vents" - that's become a permanent fixture in my head, Tom Riddle and vol-au-vents... I love it like Gollum loves the precious. :)
And finally, the ending: wonderful. I can't find any other words. I think you hit the nail on the head - not too much and not too little there...
Brilliant. You're blooming amazing.
| HerGoldenWings chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
actually sadly close to tears.
going to miss this series so much D:
Yesterday I thought I hadn't read it, but I went to open the first one after that and realised I had read them and justtt... arghhh oh my god i'll miss them so much. xD
| Cellar chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
God, you made me cry. That was so sad and so beautiful! I feel sorry for her. And for him.
| Anon chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
I just can't believe the endings you write for your Tomione stories. The one-shots are so good, but you tend to make Voldemort nicer than is realistic whenever the end comes. Hmm... I still loved your Tomione series, though. I think "Wait for the Song to Stop" was my favorite!
| Shan84 chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
I really loved this little series! you captured Hermione's emotions so well and I thought Tom/Voldemort was quite believable as well.
It was, of course, very sad at the end. But at the same time it ended well.
Good work, I do hope you continue to write more Tom/Hermione stories in the future :)
| HereToRead84 chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
aww is sad that is this the end. Hope you write more t/h but with happy endings haha
| unfortunallyforgotmypassword chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
mymy i as always amazed by your storys. A great one :)
| Soshoryu chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
This is a very fitting end. You are officially amazing, and i LOVE that you are so passionate about Tom, as he is absolutely fantastic. I'm going to sorely miss this little set of one-shots. It has been a guilty pleasure of sorts, and when women was posted, i was thrilled and mortified as i wanted to know what happened next and was dismayed at the thought of the end. I don't really know what to say, anymore. Sorta have run out of thoughts, aside from that i'm desperate for another tomione from you. I just dont want this to end. Well, the best thing i can say to tie this all off is that this oneshot, as well as the whole series is wonderful, so thanks for giving the world a lovely little guilty pleasure such as this. Lovely, reading it!