|Reviews for Sleepstuck|
| PhasicDreamer chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Hey! Great story by the way, I love how you made us guess on who the couples are especially since we can actually fit some of you ships into these scenarios.
| Sarah chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Oh My Gog make more PLEASE! At the begining it was totally KK and TZ. But near the end it was totally TG and GG. AUUUUURRRGGGHHHH! (Karkat x Terezi, Dave x Jade) :D IM SO CONFUSSEDEDDD!
| scopesam123 chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
| aestheticisms chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
So, you're my new favorite author. That's what's up.
I think my favorite part was with Jade and Dave.
[[He of all people knows she's nowhere near as fragile as she comes off, but for the moments like these he makes believe, stealing these scattered seconds to pretend he's some sort of hero. It's selfish, stupid, but for just a little while he doesn't care. As he holds her he can carve a fairy tale out of this twisted story.]]
lskaflksdajflads; ;w; All of my cries, take them. This just about broke my poor shipping heart. In a good way, yes. I love this fairytale motif with them, I just do~
I am the queen of stupid reviews, it's official.
Anyhow, amazing work, amazing amazing~ You are so awesome.
| k13aquamarine chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
I looked at some of the review theories... but here are mine. The first one was obviously Karkat, because he's depriving himself of sleep and she called him a jerk. At first I thought she was Terezi because of the smile, but then you used the word 'spidery', which led me to believe it was Vriska.
The second one I most definitely thought was Dave and Jade, because you used a camera metaphor, and Dave is sort of an amateur photographer. Also, Jade comes off as fragile, but she's actually not.
The third one, I honestly have no clue... I can see how she could be Rose, with the overreaction and wanting to make things right. And I could see it being either John or Dave, because John would order 'pal-hugs', but Dave would answer sarcastically to the dominance thing.
Of course, I could also be reading more into your writing than you had intended. :)
| Pieishyx chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Hahaha I remember reading this from .. What's it called? Archive of our own I think. But this is just too cute oh and
3. Jade and Dave
(I'm a cheater)
| ColdGoldLazarus chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Okay, the first one is either TerezixKarkat or VriskaxEridian?
The second one is either DavexJade or DavexAradia
And the third is most certainly RosexJohn.
Either way, this is great!
| Farla chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
Drabble 100 words exactly. It's a writing exercise, not a word for a short fic.
["Guh, shut up," and she leans up, tipping her lips to meet his for just a breath. ]
Dialogue is written as "Hello," he said or "Hello!" he said, never "Hello." He said or "Hello." he said or "Hello," He said or "Hello" he said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn't contain a speech verb, in which case it's written as "Hello." He grinned, never "Hello," he grinned or "Hello," He grinned. Note that something isn't a speech verb just because it's a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you're breaking up two complete sentences it's "Hi," he said. "This is it." not "Hi," he said, "this is it." or "Hi," he said "this is it." And if you're breaking up a sentence in the middle, it's "Hi. This," he said, "is it." If there's no speech verb in the break, you use a dash, like "Hi. This - " He looked around. "- is it."
Anyway...dunno, concept is okay but I wish you'd state who they are at the end, just because it's annoying to guess but not be able to tell if you're right or wrong. The first one seems like it's Terezi and Karkat. The second I have no idea of - the references to time and wings make it seem like Dave/Davesprite, and that would make the girl Jade. Three seems like it's with Rose, so by the same reasoning the other one is John.
| XxXDark-LightxXx chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
First one's probably Karkat x Terezi, and the last one is definitly John x Rose!
The second one is kind of tricky... Dave x Jade?
I liked these a lot! From the prompt in the kink meme amirite? :D
| inspiredCritic chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Ha, great story. : I liked it.
I think the first pairing is Vriska x Eridan.
The second is Dave x Jade.
And the third is John x Rose.