Reviews for I Assure You We're Open
DakDak chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Ok I don't believe I have ever seen the movie Clerks, but I nonetheless enjoyed this story. It was well-written, quite funny, and althought all of the characters were in different positions, the story felt refreshing and good, rather than like a plot with Regualar Show themes sloppily taped on in the end. Hmm as far as characterization goes Benson was perfect, Margaret was great (maybe she even had a little too much personality ;) jk), I feel like Mordecai was a little more aggressive than normal, although I would be terribly pissed if someone woke ME up at 6 in the morning. And finally, MuscleMan was in perfect character too...disgusting, perverted, to the point, and makes conversations feel awkward. Wonderful job! I honestly can't determine HFG's characterization because he hasn't really done much so far. So for now I'm going to ignore him. The sneaky business man was a great character too! He threw in some problems for poor Mordecai. I'm assuming we will see him and "4 and a Half Hour Energy" again ;)

So all in all, I have not seen Clerks, but I feel like this story is strong enough to stand on it's own, and that is was well enough written to not only hold my interest, but to also make me look forward to more! Thank you for you hard work

Congratulations 10/10

-DakDak
Rayeli chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
MOAR