|Reviews for The Ballad of Mona Lisa|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
Checking your other stories I've noticed that you lean more towards the black/white pairing and this is kinda rude but can I say that I think you write cheren/white better than chessshipping? xD not that I'm saying you write chess bad is just that I'm not a big fan of protag ships because they tend to be so similar to each other, and somehow Cheren/White has quite an amazing chemistry in parts of the game in my opinoin, and I think you captured their relationship beautifully, how Cheren being usually cold and serious can get so sensitive over their bestfriends and isn't afraid to show it to White and how she can be so sweet and tender with him despite being usually reckless and straightforward, that something I loved about this. I'm also glad the quartet solved all their differences. I have nothing else to say that your writing is amazing and I hope to see more of this
| phionexxx chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
OMG WHEN CHEREN STARTED CRYING I DID TOOOOO ;_;
| young dawn chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
I loved it. A remarkable storyline, and you've a wonderful style of writing. Well done.
| BeautifulPichu chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
Wow! This was adorable! -
Keep it up!
By the way, I love the title. :)
Panic! At The Disco, right? -
| Padfoot Arcanine chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
Wow, this was wonderful! I think you did an amazing, amazing job on this. Keep up the great work!
| arisu rin chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
I love when people refer to White as such a dangerous reckless character.
"She couldn't imagine him with any other name. If his name had been Sam, or Nate, it probably wouldn't have been the same."
I like this line- because in games you have the option of naming the character, and since Cheren's name is already set in the beginning defining him as that character. A name could tell a lot about a person.
"Nine in the afternoon?" P!ATD, isn't it?
All in all, I adored it. With Cheren's uncertain personality and White's reckless confidence. Black/Elesa was a nice touch, as well.
| Chaotic Memory chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
So little Cheren/White shipping in the world...
This was well done!
| AlFlowerrise chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Oh goshgoshgosh, this is so extremely wonderful. Do you know that? You better do! Waah!
Okay, I've really been thinking that you have improved a lot lately and this really is proof. I mean, it's brilliant, how you start and how you end and everything in between. Nothing is rushed and White and Cheren's relationship slowly grows, it's not one of those Oh, my God, she's so pretty, I'm in love, I love you, no it's much better than that.
I also like that you put in all the couples I have you, that was not what I expected and I like when people surprise me. The café-scene was very enjoyable, exactly like I pictured it in my head and you chose the Striaton-café, just like I wished you would. Are you a mind-reader? o_o
One of the things I loved most about this was the CherenBianca dilemma you input in there. I love that couple as well and I don't know about you but I like things like this, when someone gets hurt emotionally because it's so real, it's like life in a nutshell. Nothing is easy and when writers use that in novels it's like, perfect, I don't know, I think I'm rambling here.
I love your Cheren, he's in character and I love his way of thinking of White. I don't know why I like that couple, but I have a fondness of pairing him with girls (Bianca, White) that are very different from himself, that sees the world differently than he does.
But most of all, the language. It's so pretty. I cannot choose my favorites because they are too many, but I can say that this is a brilliant piece that was so wroth the wait. I will take the chance now to thank YOU for the glorious review you gave on my story. Those reviews are like, I don't know, something that makes your whole day. It's for these kind of people I want to write for, because they really tell you how much they appreciate it. They don't hide it. Like you!
Thank you for this, really, thank you. And for that comment about me in the end too, gosh, I almost screamed in happiness. You are so kind. Really, you are. Thank you!
If you don't mind I would like to do this again someday. Maybe write a shorter one, but still. Writing to you was a pleasure. I so enjoyed it.
Thank you again for this. So much :):):) 3
| Not So Tempramental Artist chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
My goodness! I wonder why this doesn't have more reviews. Well, first off, this is incredibly written. The fact that it's not Cheren confessing to Touko or the other way around is a breath of fresh air. I also really enjoyed the plot. It was a bit simple, but thats what made it good. Wonderful job!
| shut up guys chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Fler dee fler I have nothing to say...
But I liked it very much! it was very beautifully worded and detailed!
| CoffeeIncluded chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
Where do you get these titles from? And I see that even here you've still got the Cheren/Bianca ship. :P