|Reviews for The Raven and the Hawk|
| EverAndAnon chapter 7 . 10/12/2015
I really loved your three Anders/Justice/Hawke series'. Anders and Hawke having twins (and a happy ending for the most part) is now my head canon. :)
Really well written stories, I enjoyed reading every chapter.
| EverydayMagic17 chapter 7 . 7/4/2015
| EverydayMagic17 chapter 3 . 7/4/2015
Yes...yes...both in this case...
| Hawkeing chapter 7 . 11/15/2014
I loved reading these oneshots. It was really fun reading snapshots of different things that could have happened between Hawke and Anders in different situations or times.
And the last chapter was adorable! You did a great job of making Anders and Justice more like their old selves, which really would have changed the entire story. It would be really interesting to see more of that plotline!
| Havoc Hg chapter 3 . 8/6/2011
I love this chapter. Quite possibly one of my favorites.
| Havoc Hg chapter 7 . 8/6/2011
You, serah, are creator to quite possibly THE BEST depiction of how Justice/Anders and Hawke would work, ever. And I mean that in the Tempering Justice and other fic that I can't remember the name of but also love dearly and will favorite as well. I am so very appreciative of you and your stories. They have become something very cl
| Takara-of-the-Notorious-6 chapter 7 . 7/22/2011
I love all of your DA2 works! So I bague you pleas wright more!
| millahnna chapter 7 . 7/1/2011
Oh now this little plot bunny has me desperate for an AU DA2 story where the merger when perfectly. The tale you've presented is sweet and all (and seriously adorable and I love it) but the implications to the plot of the game are just staggering. Seriously, if anyone reads this and knows of such a fic, for the love of the Maker please PM me.
| ChiChi-O chapter 7 . 6/27/2011
I love this chapter, it's so happy and sweet seeing Anders fumble around Hawke:)
I like this Hawke she's sweet but in a way that she's still human. I loved Merrill and Anders bonding (Merrill won the pot ha!) and the idea of the flowers was amazing.
Loved this fluffy chapters and can't eait for another prompt so thanks and update whenever:)
| JadeOokami chapter 7 . 6/27/2011
This chapter definitely made me smile 8D It's very cute, and I love that Justice has a hand in the whole thing. I'm guessing this is when Hawke still lives in Lowtown since Carver is there.
I also liked Merril's inclusion a lot. She amuses me greatly, but often she's either bashed or authors miss the part of her than makes her amusing and then she's not so cool.
It was a very cute, sweet one-shot. I enjoyed it.
| massivelyattacked chapter 7 . 6/26/2011
Absolutely beautiful...it's 2 AM and thanks to you, I shall have very pleasant thoughts indeed as I attempt to visit my own version of the Fade.
Just lovely...as usual!
| Reflection Muse chapter 6 . 6/26/2011
Hello, head!canon sister! :D I'll try not to repeat myself too much between this comment and the one I left you on the BSN. I genuinely enjoyed this piece, especially the way you described everything. You used some great bits of very impactful imagery. The third and fourth 'paragraphs' in this are my favorite.
I also love the idea of Hawke being the source of his hope, and the one to help him 'find his voice', which I imagine happening in more ways than one.
I look forward to reading more of your works! :)
| ginganinja23 chapter 6 . 6/26/2011
Wow, this is a superb exploration of the merger of Justice & Anders. I don't think I have yet to consider Justice's point of view of it any deeper than his original intention until reading this.
Beautiful use of prose as well to describe it.
It's also like you went into my head & saw my canon coz this is it! Hawke's effect on Anders will never be able to 'fix' it but 'changes' both Anders & Justice.
Although you went further and I'm pondering whether you mean to say that Justice has also realised he is something new & Anders was right; he's not Justice anymore but also wrong because he's not pure vengeance either?
Anyway Hawke's ability to lend Anders/Justice strength of focus, I need that chink of hope for them :D
| ChiChi-O chapter 6 . 6/24/2011
I love each and every chapter, you do all characters justice and I enjoy the love shown between Hawke and Anders/Justice in all situations:)
Please update when you can:D
| Widu chapter 6 . 6/24/2011
That was rather haunting. I re-read Anders' words of warning to Merrill lately, and this seems to suit them perfectly. Frightening, really. And is it just me or does the last paragraph only worsen that effect...