|Reviews for Natural|
| AngelesPG chapter 1 . 12/17/2017
Claro cuando Gary decide dejar de acostarse con cualquiera vuelven a besarse como amantes mientras que Ash espera como idiota a su amigo y amor de la infancia inocente que decepción como Gary sabiendo que ellos eran más que amigos decide hacer esas cosas, no se necesitan palabras para respetar un lazo o relación tan especial que dices que tienen, solo espero que cuando Ash se entere se de cuenta del egoísmo de Gary
| MurphytheFox chapter 1 . 12/12/2017
*Sniff* This is the best lemon i have ever read its so passionate, i am now following you!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2017
OMFG THIS WAS SUPER GOOD
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 10/7/2017
This piece, was absolutely incredible. I loved how specific you had been, it was almost as if I was feeling each and every emotion they experienced. I personally, loved the Lemony goodness! I’ve secretly had a thing, when I was younger for Gary and Ash. You did an astronomical job! Don’t sweat if it was too many intimate details, because my friend it was Muy Perfecto!
| Jasow chapter 1 . 10/3/2017
I love it 5/5 stars idc what people say to my comment but palletshipping for life :D
| CharizardChase17 chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
most kinky thing i ever read, *curls up in a ball*
| ikeea chapter 1 . 3/18/2017
AMAZING! just what I needed when my mind is going crazy... a dash of smut;)
HOPE YOU HAVE A AMAZEBALLS DAY.
| Maggie chapter 1 . 3/8/2017
Wuved this fic soooooo much! X3
| Chibi chapter 1 . 2/18/2017
This is me writing.. I just get tired of no smut and make some terrible excuse to get it to that point, or I just start out with smut.. ;) lmao~! Have a nice day/night man~!
| TheFatLittleCat chapter 1 . 1/9/2017
this had more romantic smut then other fanfics. i like it
| Nickaustin90 chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
Oh lordy, in the interest of saving me from my mob of angry readers I'm going to review this as a guest. I haven't updated my stories since you posted this fanfic. I am a bad person
/puts self in corner
Back to you. Ohhhh lawdy, lord! I wish I could write as amazing as you have! The whole story flowed so perfectly I just couldn't take my eyes away. The emotions, man these feelings. I haven't felt them in a long time. So thank you very much for that. I'm practically rambling here but words can barely describe this overwhelming content I feel for this story. So really, thank you for a wonderful piece of writing.
| Taki14 chapter 1 . 12/14/2016
WHAT IN THE HELL DO YOU MEAN "To be honest, I think it's really quite overwritten, describing things way too much a d probably using the same words too often. I'm sorryI CRIED IN THE MIDDLE OF THOSE DESCRIPTIONS OK I WAS MOVED TO TEARS YOU MADE ME CRY IN THE MIDDLE OF A SMUT SCENE. ONLY GOOD WRITERS (at least in my personal opinion, since I'm a "writer" myself and now I aspire to write super good smut like you did here) MAKE READERS CRY IN THE MIDDLE OF A SMUT SCENE
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2016
There was enough lemons to make 50 gallons of lemonade XD
| Annya chapter 1 . 11/21/2016
Love it! Any chance for a continuation of this? (｡･ω･｡) honestly it's perfect 3 u wrote a really good story! (ω*)
| korohoshi chapter 1 . 10/11/2016
Now. Thats sweet and hawt.. so very hot. Its very cute. Endearing.