|Reviews for Natural|
| CharizardChase17 chapter 1 . 8/3
most kinky thing i ever read, *curls up in a ball*
| ikeea chapter 1 . 3/18
AMAZING! just what I needed when my mind is going crazy... a dash of smut;)
HOPE YOU HAVE A AMAZEBALLS DAY.
| Maggie chapter 1 . 3/8
Wuved this fic soooooo much! X3
| Chibi chapter 1 . 2/18
This is me writing.. I just get tired of no smut and make some terrible excuse to get it to that point, or I just start out with smut.. ;) lmao~! Have a nice day/night man~!
| TheFatLittleCat chapter 1 . 1/9
this had more romantic smut then other fanfics. i like it
| Nickaustin90 chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
Oh lordy, in the interest of saving me from my mob of angry readers I'm going to review this as a guest. I haven't updated my stories since you posted this fanfic. I am a bad person
/puts self in corner
Back to you. Ohhhh lawdy, lord! I wish I could write as amazing as you have! The whole story flowed so perfectly I just couldn't take my eyes away. The emotions, man these feelings. I haven't felt them in a long time. So thank you very much for that. I'm practically rambling here but words can barely describe this overwhelming content I feel for this story. So really, thank you for a wonderful piece of writing.
| Taki14 chapter 1 . 12/14/2016
WHAT IN THE HELL DO YOU MEAN "To be honest, I think it's really quite overwritten, describing things way too much a d probably using the same words too often. I'm sorryI CRIED IN THE MIDDLE OF THOSE DESCRIPTIONS OK I WAS MOVED TO TEARS YOU MADE ME CRY IN THE MIDDLE OF A SMUT SCENE. ONLY GOOD WRITERS (at least in my personal opinion, since I'm a "writer" myself and now I aspire to write super good smut like you did here) MAKE READERS CRY IN THE MIDDLE OF A SMUT SCENE
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2016
There was enough lemons to make 50 gallons of lemonade XD
| Annya chapter 1 . 11/21/2016
Love it! Any chance for a continuation of this? (｡･ω･｡) honestly it's perfect 3 u wrote a really good story! (ω*)
| korohoshi chapter 1 . 10/11/2016
Now. Thats sweet and hawt.. so very hot. Its very cute. Endearing.
| Niko chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
An actually amazing palletshipping fanfic I've read in a while! I almost cried reading the part where 8 year old Gary tells Ash that his parents died
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2016
My heart is going through so many emotions. This story was really good.
| anonymous chapter 1 . 9/19/2016
"at least ok-ish."...YOU,madam(or sir),are a fanfiction GENIUS!the PERFECT combination of smut and mutal fluff!And the part at the end with Pikachu and Eevee was KAWAII!Am I the only one who ranks this as a number ONE on my top ten fanfic list?!I LOVE IT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!lD333
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
I loved it :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
Best beautiful smex I've read in a long time! It wasn't over described it was perfect! I loved how we got to see it from both their sides and that they didn't just ' magically wake up and decide that yes sex with ash/Gary would be awesome' but instead had a connection all along