|Reviews for Hold On Girl|
| Jedi Jesi Jiin chapter 2 . 8/27/2014
Awe! I love the ending, so sad, but I love that Luke cried, it's so fitting and he needed that.
| Stephanie Walter chapter 5 . 1/18/2014
WOW! Talk about a roller coaster ride! This was a great story! A Sequel is definitely in order... Keep up the good stories.
If I can speak as a fellow author for a moment (don't hate me)... your story was amazing, but some of your thoughts came across as confusing, or overbearing. What I mean to say is that your overall grammar and use of language was a bit strained. I don't know what program is used in FanFiction, I am new here, but punctuation would really help with getting your message across in a more flowing way. Perhaps you could write the story in Microsoft Word (or something like it), have it checked using the editing tools therein, then copy and paste to FanFiction?
Anyway, I really enjoyed this! And I hope to see more! Great job! :)
| Danyl chapter 5 . 9/2/2011
I liked it very much!
You finally did the last chapters, so I could read the end of it.
I wish you do a sequel...
I liked Mara's and Han's interaction. Poor him...That is the reason why his last name is Solo...
| Totalstarwarsfan-girl332 chapter 5 . 6/1/2011
Please,Please, PLEASE do a sequel! This is such a good story, and my friends and I are desperately wanting to hear more about Luke and Mara. You have such talent, please continue with another story! We are depending on you! :D