Reviews for Arrested
Little Gem Magnolia chapter 1 . 6/27
This was a nice ficlet. You're right, I wouldn't expect John to act that way and it took me a minute to realize that Melissa was an OC, ha-ha. I thought I'd missed something in the series.

Nicely written though.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
This amazing! So cleverly written.
Dance of the Dead chapter 1 . 4/22/2012

I rarely reply to comments. Feel special.

I'm sorry that my portrayal of Rambo doesn't fit your own mental image; good job we're all different hey.

And, if I was writing my own fantasies out with canon characters, they wouldn't be allowed on for their explicit nature.

Just cause you can be a jerk, doesn't mean you should be.

Next time, maybe you should make your critique a bit more constructive; I would like that a lot.
Rodney chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
This story sucks. Sorry to be blunt but this characterization of John Rambo does not match anything the movies portrayed or what I think about him. By the way, who the fuck is Melissa? This reads like a Harlequin novel giving the writer a chance to fantasize about her with Rambo. just because you can write doesn't necessarily mean you should.
Amanda17 chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Really enjoyed this. Good writing and character development.