|Reviews for Finding a loophole in an Alpha order|
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/14/2016
| Airhead chapter 8 . 3/6/2016
See you wrote "To be continued" however it is 4 years later and still nothing has been updated this is the tenth time I have read this story over the past few years waiting diligently for an update but there is still no update. UPDATE! I am not creative enough to have this continue in my brain. I do not care if you are not into twilight any longer you need to do something with this story!
| JesAFan chapter 8 . 5/20/2015
Omg! Please! Please! Add another chapter! I'm sitting on pins and needles here!
| Michonyx chapter 8 . 11/11/2014
PLEASE finish this story! This is too good to leave languishing in a virtual desk drawer. I've been hooked by this impossible love affair and am burning for more. If you're unable to finish it yourself for some reason or other, please consider letting someone adopt it. I'm ready to try taking a crack at it myself; that's how desperate I am for a continuation. It's too good to abandon and I hope you update it as soon as you feel like it. Thank you for listening.
| reader chapter 8 . 11/20/2013
| jace4ever chapter 8 . 1/25/2013
OMG! Hot as all hell. Can't wait for the actual sex cause this was just to much. Very visual, very feeling, very just very DAMN. Please update soon.
| Ennah1887 chapter 8 . 12/28/2012
Please continue! I'm dying for it here! Its been almost a year. About 11 months. Please Please update, its an amazing story, and i would really like to know what happens in it. Please?
| twifantasyfan chapter 8 . 12/24/2012
Just discovered this and hope you plan to continue it at some point.
| Kalastra chapter 8 . 10/6/2012
i love this story please update soon
| Maddy chapter 8 . 8/13/2012
Please please try and update this soon! The story line is awesome!
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/28/2012
I love it all.
| alykat14 chapter 8 . 6/26/2012
Ah, I hope Jared chooses Paul and that chapter is soon! By the title, I thought this would have happened a little differently, but I like it.
| Alohamora-Obliviate chapter 8 . 5/28/2012
Please, please, PLEASE continue!
| YouFoundMeAgainXx chapter 8 . 4/27/2012
wow just wow update soon please xxx
| cottoncandybl52 chapter 8 . 4/19/2012
Update this plze