Reviews for Finding a loophole in an Alpha order
JesAFan chapter 8 . 5/20
Omg! Please! Please! Add another chapter! I'm sitting on pins and needles here!

Much love...
Michonyx chapter 8 . 11/11/2014
PLEASE finish this story! This is too good to leave languishing in a virtual desk drawer. I've been hooked by this impossible love affair and am burning for more. If you're unable to finish it yourself for some reason or other, please consider letting someone adopt it. I'm ready to try taking a crack at it myself; that's how desperate I am for a continuation. It's too good to abandon and I hope you update it as soon as you feel like it. Thank you for listening.
reader chapter 8 . 11/20/2013
plz continue!
jace4ever chapter 8 . 1/25/2013
OMG! Hot as all hell. Can't wait for the actual sex cause this was just to much. Very visual, very feeling, very just very DAMN. Please update soon.
Ennah1887 chapter 8 . 12/28/2012
Please continue! I'm dying for it here! Its been almost a year. About 11 months. Please Please update, its an amazing story, and i would really like to know what happens in it. Please?
twifantasyfan chapter 8 . 12/24/2012
Just discovered this and hope you plan to continue it at some point.
TinkersBells chapter 8 . 10/6/2012
i love this story please update soon
Maddy chapter 8 . 8/13/2012
Please please try and update this soon! The story line is awesome!
Guest chapter 8 . 6/28/2012
I love it all.
alykat14 chapter 8 . 6/26/2012
Ah, I hope Jared chooses Paul and that chapter is soon! By the title, I thought this would have happened a little differently, but I like it.
Alohamora-Obliviate chapter 8 . 5/28/2012
Please, please, PLEASE continue!
YouFoundMeAgainXx chapter 8 . 4/27/2012
wow just wow update soon please xxx
cottoncandybl52 chapter 8 . 4/19/2012
Update this plze
BlueRose03 chapter 2 . 4/5/2012
Update please! :)
SoundShield11 chapter 8 . 2/3/2012
So tragic. Sam is a total jerk. Really hope that he gets what's coming to him at some point. However, the thought of Jared accepting is just intriguing. Looking forward to your update.
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