Reviews for And What Alice Found There
SixPerfections chapter 29 . 9/25/2015
Damn. It feels like the story was close to finishing. Oh well. Its on my favorites, hope you update one day. Really love this story. I could seriously read this though the lifetimes of several characters. You, sir/madam, deserve the highest of Fanfiction praise. Bravo.
SixPerfections chapter 28 . 9/25/2015
Greenwich in the Sky... I can't even... that was... damn. I love that metal remix btw. This story is just awesome.

Stars disappearing? Oh my.
SixPerfections chapter 16 . 9/25/2015
Oh shit! I finally got it. And it's so obvious in hindsight too! I'm terrible at this sort of reading the hints sometimes. Minerva is going to end up helping create the barrier! AAAAAAHHHHH!

Awesome. Just awesome. I have to admit I really miss seeing the Touhou characters we all know and love in more leading roles but this is still very interesting and done to me. Very nice. Compliments flow like an unending stream.
SixPerfections chapter 13 . 9/25/2015
Well. That was trippy as fuck. Seriously felt like a bad mushroom trip. Loved spotting all the different things that correspond to the 'canon' Touhou we know and love. Love the more "realistic" take on Youkai too. This is very much like a whismsical fairy tale type thang. Did she even get the mushrooms?
SixPerfections chapter 12 . 9/25/2015
Fuck you Yukari. Cryptic and annoying and manipulative as always. I love you.

Great story.
SixPerfections chapter 11 . 9/25/2015
Heh. Like this fan origin for spellcards. I kinda hope Minerva can learn from Mima. That would be awesome. I really like your oc
SixPerfections chapter 9 . 9/25/2015
SixPerfections chapter 8 . 9/25/2015
This is so fascinating. The little insights into japanese culture are neat. Love it.
SixPerfections chapter 7 . 9/25/2015
You tease! How could you not show us a Chibi Marisa in this chapter? You are evil! XD
SixPerfections chapter 4 . 9/25/2015
Oh, I'm a little slow on the uptake! Should have guessed before this that the little girl taken in a Mierva was Alice. It makes perfect sense. That guy driving the carriage is probably Keine's dad. So cool! XD

But don't they have a shrine maiden to take care of the Youkai? Huh. We'll find out I suppos.e
SixPerfections chapter 3 . 9/25/2015
This is really cool. Like, original. Feels like a travelbook. I'm very curious. Also, Aya! Though is she THAT tengu Aya? TIme will tell...
SixPerfections chapter 1 . 9/25/2015
Heh. Original take. Yukari is up to her usual tricks I see XD
BlackMoon91 chapter 29 . 6/22/2015
I'm just commenting to let you know that at least one person still reads and checks this in the hope that it will one day continue. I've just finished reading through it for the third time in a year, and it still entertains me as much as the first. I'm really saddened that this story has been adandoned or otherwise put on hiatus, but I understand that real life can get in the way of hobbies. Regardless of if the story ever continues, I just want to say thank you for writing one of the most entertaining fanfictions I've ever read.
Guest chapter 29 . 7/1/2014
Please update, this is wonderful and yet also quite a terrifying tale (in the sense that it presents gensyoko as a land of mystery, especially given all the subtle hints and references to modern touhou)
Black Noise47 chapter 29 . 6/25/2014
This is quite an interesting story, and despite my limited familiarity with Touhou and general dislike for annoyingly mysterious characters I find myself liking it nonetheless.

One thing I'd like is for Alice to have more of a voice; aside a few scenes you've mostly been telling instead of showing when describing events related to her, resulting in a sort of reduced impact/agency.

Hopefully now that the Incident begun well see more behind the shrine maiden's mask and just what Minerva has planned.

Thanks for writing so far, I'll be following this from now on.
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