|Reviews for The Black Games|
| SharkSurge chapter 37 . 3/4
D: this was so sad. and ty lee is my fave character *sniff sniff*
| peter pan's horcrux chapter 37 . 3/3
I actually really enjoyed reading this, and seeing the improvement of your writing style as the story progressed. I have to admit, I didn't think I would actually get into this story that much, yet you had me literally bawling my eyes out at multiple parts in this! It was brilliant! I did like the Hunger Games, but I loved this because Katara was so much more attached, and therefore felt a lot more real. It was a lot more emotional than THG, and that's what made it so great, I think. I also admire the way you kept everyone in character, but still kept them true to the Games – especially Suki. I was glad she didn't try to get it in with Sokka or whatever, because if Suki really was in the games, she would be that lethal, solo tribute. I also loved how this was Zutara (my babies) but you didn't bash Aang or make him out to be inferior or dumb or annoying or anything. And I really loved the development of Zutara. You portrayed it so wonderfully; it wasn't icky and unrealistically fast, nor was it too slow and shy. It was just perfect and in-character and wow. Also, I love how you interact with your readers/reviewers, that was really sweet to see! Thanks for sharing this, it was wonderful!
| Blackvelvet94 chapter 37 . 3/2
What the hell! You made me cry twice! You are like Steven Moffat, brilliant and ruthless. Great story and I am glad you ended in tragedy - very poignant. Beautifully written and excellent plot, but I am still sad about Zuko and Sokka dying. Especially Zuko.
| SpookiPooki chapter 1 . 2/14
I love this story so much! Looking forward to The Phoenix Queen's next update! Keep it up!
| Ms0Nicole0 chapter 36 . 2/10
WHAT. *sobs* .what. noooooo.. zuko! :(
| Ftrur chapter 37 . 1/26
This story was so great!
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/23
So there are two types of fics out there that I actually read.
The first are the rare-gem, well-written and well planned that have a fascinating plot, realistic character development, and keep me interested with creativity and uniqueness.
The second kind are the quasi-contenting stories that are sub-par in writing, a bit lacking in plot, and usually contain enough plot holes and grammar goofs to sink the Titanic in its watery grave. Yet somehow, they keep you hooked and don't let you go until the story's over, even though you know you're going to hate yourself for putting yourself though the emotional rollercoaster.
| Avatarlover123 chapter 27 . 1/21
i don't think i've ever cried so much ! i couldn't breathe the Sokka dying was to much ! amazing writing & story , bye for now
| Avatarlover123 chapter 24 . 1/20
you made me cry when you killed Aang dam! i shouldn't get attached to characters i now better i watch the vampire diaries , people always die including favorite characters. One more chapter and i'm done for the night , amazing writing & chapter, i would read the whole story but i have school
| Hama4life chapter 36 . 1/18
Oh thank god! For a second there I thought Katara was going to commit suicide.
| Twelle chapter 27 . 1/12
OOOOhh my God. first of all, this is like the 3rd time i read this story of urs, i just adoooore ur stories Mrs Pettyfer, ur soooo sooo goood at whatever story u write and the way u write them! :O and ok now 2ª is.. this chapter..., even though it's not the firt time i read it.. it .. it made me cry soooooo sooo much! I have a little brother-not little actually XD- only 2 and half years younger than me, nd from the very moment he was born, i fell inlove i swear, he's been my world! and i guess it has to do with the fact our parents were too bussy, and i always saw him as more than just a brother, as.. my own child, but also as if he was my twin, my best friend, my walking mirror, "a part of my soul" just as u said. i dont know if u have brothers nor how in the world u managed to write this chapter, but girl.. it was perfect, really! it broke me down.. completely :') in a good way i guess, congratulations for having such a beautiful talent :') 3 its a pleasure reading ur masterpieces :')
| 1ZutaraFan chapter 28 . 1/10
Oh. My. Gosh! I was just rereading this brilliant story, and I read the quote at the top of this chapter. First off, I love this quote. It is so amazing, I can't even say. But really, one of my all time favorite real life authors (pro, not fanfic, lol) wrote a book cantered around (kinda) that quote! It's called A Trick of the Light, by Louise Penny. (She's on Facebook!) Its the latest (so far) in a series, but she writes beautifully. (As do you!) But if you're interested in mystery and/or French (it's set in Canada) then you should read it. Anyway, sorry for the rant, but giant thumbs up from me! :)
| chelley.rising chapter 5 . 1/9
Nope. Time to read reviews and see who dies
| chelley.rising chapter 4 . 1/9
This is depressing, nooo. Suki too? Please tell me the original Gaang comes together and fights, including Suki and Zuko. Oh man wait. If Zuko and Katara are Peeta and Katniss then...lol oh man. How is this going to work?
| chelley.rising chapter 2 . 1/9
Oh God this is the Hunger Games and all the main characters are in it... who's Rue, Toph or Sang?