Reviews for Deception
WritersProse chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
This makes me feel really bad for poor Velvet. "Just stay with me, okay?" And then the following night, in her eyes, her love had no doubt completely abandoned her. Talk about your sickness.

Though I'm not really a big fan of incest, I enter each fic with an open mind. This one actually intrigued me quite a bit, and didn't seem too far removed from the usual motivations of the characters in the game.

A fairly solid job. Kept my interest, though I would lay off of the "..." a little bit. It seemed a bit distracting after a while, though that might just be a personal stylistic thing.