|Reviews for Looms Of Fate|
| daniellelynnhenderson chapter 37 . 4/12/2013
Please tell me that's not the end! OMG I just love this story! I love how you made Bella stronger. I couldn't stop laughing when Bella put Emmett in his place lol
| ForeverTwilightSaga05 chapter 37 . 3/31/2013
| ForeverTwilightSaga05 chapter 36 . 2/24/2013
NO! Update! I was so excited for the next chapter, and I look over to press next, and it's not there D: NO!
| JustcallmeRiley chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
awwww brother sister moment
| sheeiur22 chapter 30 . 7/18/2012
Please add more.
| sujari6 chapter 26 . 6/21/2012
I hope she doesn't wait too long to be changed.
| BreakingSunShine chapter 26 . 6/12/2012
This is easily one of my favorite stories here so far, with that said, I quite enjoy the POVs but at time they are a bit confusing. The parts that confuse me are the flashbacks that Alice has and also the way the events get retold by a different character.
If i could explain the reason why i get confused during the retolds is: the story line is really good and flows easily that i get caught up in the moment that when I go to the next chapter and try to find out what is going on, I get hit with a retold in a different POV that it gets a bit disoriented and then I takes some effort to get back in the awe of the moment.
But aside from that, Kudos on the amazing story and I am such a fan that I hope you continue the story to an amazing end :)
| Socajam chapter 26 . 6/12/2012
Please update soon. I just love this story and thank you for all the hard work you have put into making it so enticing.
| Krystal Jaymes chapter 26 . 6/12/2012
You had me worried at the first part of the chapter, but you tied things together nicely in the end.
I have one complaint, though, and it is not with you at all. It's with the way Stephenie Meyer wrote Edward and Bella initially.
I like how you made Bella grow up, in the books Bella would've just sat back and took whatever was dished out. She would've let Edward just use his puppy dog eyes to get his way and I appreciate how you made her grow.
Edward, on the other hand, is actually a weak character (not your fault, again). Most relationships have one partner who is more dominant, but I think for both of them to work they both need to be dominant. Bella in the books is extremely submissive and Edward has a dominating personality, yet is extremely weak.
He is stubborn and so is she. The relationship would not work out in real life. I think that's why I have an issue with the E/B pairing. I prefer E/R, but that's irrelevant. ;)
This was a mere rant on my part, but I LOVED this chapter. I'm just tired of a weak Bella and an Edward that will grovel for forgiveness but still won't own up to things. Too controlling, too passive, etc.
Will continue to read!
| MissDadeyX chapter 24 . 6/11/2012
Omg i am soo confused is edward saying to bella that she isnt enough for him or that she is enough for him please please update again soon its great i really hope edward and bella get back together again xxx
| HollyAnne87 chapter 25 . 6/8/2012
I did sign and repost this though I have no idea how to send it to the people that run this site. That being said I feel I need to let you know that at one point there was an MA section but it was taken down years ago.
| Camilla10 chapter 6 . 5/28/2012
I have just started reading. The story is intriguing and I wish to continue, but you really need a beta editor. Too many mistakes. I am not even a native English speaker and I can see a lot of them, but there are probably more. I saw you were looking for a beta, did you find one in later chapters? ff net has an impressive list of them but you have to ask. It is really important that you do.
| sujari6 chapter 24 . 5/22/2012
Edward can be so stupid.
| sujari6 chapter 23 . 5/22/2012
It's right that their faults are being pointed out to them.
| Wilk77 chapter 24 . 5/22/2012
Wonderful story! Just started reading it today and I love it so far! I love what you've done with each character - especially Bella. Now I can't wait to see where the story goes! You are a very good writer... keep the chapters coming!