|Reviews for Love Kills Slowly|
| xXxLovexMexDeadxX17 chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
This is an interesting paringand I have to say that, even though I would never normally have thought of this pairing, I quite like it. You have a talent Khaleda. 5/5 Stars.
| Erratus Enigma chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Hell yeah, another work of yours! I knew I was to gaze into a masterpiece even before actually reading it.
And, by the devils, it's nothing but a masterpiece.
The concept starts with a simple plot, as with many one-shots, to properly allow us to gaze into the story without being confused.
Shego is hurting, somehow, and Kim is the possible cause of it. So far so good, had my mind racing with the possibilities. Then it was a roller coaster of ingenuity.
The writing was incredibly good from beginning to end, and as always your characterization is impressive. You had me believing them as real - and are they not? - with every single word that left their imaginably mouths. It had a nice flowing, such was the dark setting and the contrast of colors in my mind that it reminded me of an impressionist work of art. Truly given the magnitude of your work, it could be easily compared to.
And the humor. By the devils, I believe I have told you this before, but the humor in your stories is just fantastic. Forever changing, from dry, witty humor to full-blown stuff that slaps you in the face, it's just so good it's addictive. Your writing is a drug I'm quite happy to announce addicted.
Oh, I'm dragging myself again. The plot evolves, and it was not until the very end that the truth was unveiled. I must admit, I was expecting many things, but a happy ending was not among them. Made me all mushy and gooey in the inside, thank you.
P.S.: Incredibly, the image of Carmen Sandiego fits Shego infinitely. How did I not think of that before? Genius.
Again, your grammar is flawless, the story was incredibly, and, as always, left me wanting for more. Those are the traits of a true writer, and you walk face-to-face among them. Be it with Teen Titans, or Kim Possible, or whatever else you may decide to write, know that I'll keep reading it. And chances are good that I will keep liking it.
| Daryl chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
this story is romantic and cool. i love it
| Honulicious chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
This was really good. I'm glad Kim didn't let shego slip away. Yay!
| Clemenmore chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
damn this was good.
| sweetPixiesmile chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Where do I begin?
This was so well written. Good development and basic plot arcs, with sub-themes well placed and well described from a first person perspective, which to me is rather tricky.
Second: Loved it!
The characterization, the dialogue, both internal and external were excellent. No wasted words,as is the bane of many authors. Also, no spelling mistakes or grammatical errors... unlike my own works.
Last: Instant fan!
I am very much looking forward to your next piece!
| Rannison chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
As always, you captivate, entertain, and bring a stupid smile to me face :D. Great job, another work well done!
| Darkshadow-lord chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Great One-shot! I really enjoyed reading it!
| King in Yellow chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
I usually don't care for stories which begin in medias res, I miss the build up to that point. And too often it is the prelude to an abrupt 'happily ever after' or shallow angst. This recognizes that any given point in a relationship has its own unique hopes and uncertainties. Well done.
| longnite chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Had quite a ride with this and greatly enjoyed following our goddesses thoughts on their relationship. You did a great job laying out the various painful points of how Kim had used their relationship. It was also well played the way you had Kim work through all this and view her previous actions. The Carmen Sandiego comment was just too funny! Loved the ending...Shego knows how secure a deal!;)
| Concolor44 chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Until right there at the end I didn't know how this was going to turn out. But you never fail to impress.
I absolutely adore your writing style. It is so intimate, so earnest, so tremblingly aware of the fears and longings going on in the character's minds. The little movements and gestures and offhand comments that reveal so much so succinctly. Egad, but you are good at this!
I am so freaking jealous it isn't funny! And so excruciatingly glad that you write and share it. Favoriting.
| Hobbes the Cat chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Very entertaining. Good stuff.
| Insomniackid7 chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Very nice, a tinge of development and gripping.
| Jennifer chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
This is beautiful. I loved it.:)