Reviews for Time Bomb
bluedaisy05 chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Oh, I loved it. Brilliant writing!
Imhereforthestory chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Yep, as soon as I read it, I could see it... You did both of them justice, and should be so proud. :D
nochance chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
O mi gosh! This I'd exactly what is going on! I
Fey-Vim chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
So I really liked the story itself, but right at the end you keep switching tenses. Most of the story is written using the past tense - and that's fitting, it works! - but in the last couple paragraphs you start to flip back and forth between past and present. But if you just fixed that it would be really good!
jetteblack chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
i really like this- the narration is great. i can hear the voice in my head
Burst.ofSILENCE chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
Oh, my god. My heart just broke, in a good way.

This was so beautiful. I love how you captured their relationship. It's completely in-character and everything. I love it.
purplangel chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Love it! Your insight into the characters is dead on! Please continue this story.
I'm Widget chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Totally true. All of it. ; )
Ariel119 chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Love it. You have some real talent!
NCISchick chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
damn, that was good...loved it!

Love NCISchick oxoxoxox
castlebeckett siempre chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
excellent

write
calleigh4ever chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Love it please write more :)
Dmarx chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
I love this! No one else has written anything that summarizes their relationship in this way...it's very unique and very...them. You captured perfectly the reasons why they still aren't together, and the things that are holding them back. Well done!
HCCG chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Very nicely done.
phnxgrl chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
I loved your one shot! I loved how you encapsulized their relationship! Thanks for writing this story!