|Reviews for Edward Elric and the Order of the Phoenix|
| BabySkittleMonster chapter 1 . 2/27
I'm looking forward to when you post the chapters! I must ask though: why did you take them down in the first place? If you don't want to answer, that's fine. I'll... Uh, read you soon, I guess... Wow... If that doesn't sound weird then I don't know what does.
| ThEdOdGyOnE chapter 1 . 2/3
No! This was one of my favorite stories on this site and now it is gone until further notice :( Looking forward to the reboot! Hopefully its worth the wait since it's going to all shiny and new :)
| ladykarone chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Awww dude, you should have left the chapters as they were and then just written another chapter telling us you were gonna redo the whole story and just post it as another story and you could have given us the link to it after you had published it. Oh well, hurry up, I wanna read it!
| TrunksLoneWarrioranimelove chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Oh, I hope you're not rewriting it because of what I said! O.o My god, I hope I didn't offend you that badly. I was just offering my honest opinion and pointing things out that didn't seem right, that's all. My intentions were positive, not negative at all, I assure you!
Ah, redoing chapters. It's always a good idea to proofread chapters and look over them. I myself have quite a few I need to edit and look over...it's always good to spiff it up a bit. Amazing, update more is good, but it doesn't let you know what exactly the readers like about your story. Me? I suppose I prefer concrit or people who ask questions about the fic, cuz then it lets me know they're still engaged in it. A little better than the same reviewer spamming "great chapter, update soon."
I have always felt it best to give concrit because sometimes it can help people in ways you never know until they contact you, thanking you. I always consider it my duty to post a review, regardless of whether or not I thought the characters were OOC. I just point it out and move on if I'm still not interested. But grammar is essential to understanding a story, you realize. That's one of those things you gotta watch out for. Recently a guest dropped a helpful review saying they found some spelling errors that even I didn't catch on to.
See, people like that are rare. -' Depression, huh? Well, your personal life has nothing to do with writing, and besides this reviewer here suffers from the same issues herself, but does she let it get her down? Nope, I keep on steaming ahead and update anyway.
I'm glad you're still writing it. It's completely okay to redo a story if you don't like how it's going. There's a fic of mine that I just can't seem to get right...sigh, gonna have to work on that one, too. Sorry, I just can't help but be honest about things.
Well, I hope you continue it soon. :/ I really hope it wasn't my fault you stopped writing; I just felt like Ed was mostly in-character except for a few moments, that's all. But you know Ed; he's not exactly the drop secrets of my past thing casually to anyone who wants to listen. Maybe wait until the end and have him tell them until he can trust them? Trust alone is hard enough for Ed.
| InfinitelyBoredForTheMoment chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
Good luck! I'm looking forward to it.
| Kyra chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
I understood that reference :) Can't wait for the new and redone chapters to come out! Keep up with the good work!
| Evilbunny0 chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Yay determination! You don't have to go fast, there are other stories on this site so we'll read them while you write. And if people still hate, just tell them to read another story, or ask them why their reading it, or tell them "don't like, don't read, don't review". Also, was I one of the bad reviewers? I try to follow most of the rules here (compliment after error fix request, mostly) but i don't know if I came off as mean.
Nice job putting your foot down, I'll remember these lines if someone's giving someone a hard time. Including you.
(I'm being too sentimental right now, aren't I?)
| Guest chapter 18 . 10/21/2013
...this is a really good story, but I agree with you, some people on here can be complete jerks, so I understand why you are doing this. I think that if you kept on writing the story it would've turned out fantastic.
| Kage Hakari chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
I would have appreciated being able to re-read the story so that I could give you a through and detailed review. Anyway re-writes are fun can't wait to see how you'll change it.
| Latias876 chapter 18 . 10/21/2013
It was such a nice story! PLEASE continue it! Please...?
| Bashirisuku chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
why change it? it was good.
| The Storm Phase Alchemist chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Hey! Don't give up! I personally thought it was an amazing story with a new look at this crossover! I wish you luck with rewriting this! And seriously, it's amazing, don't you dare think otherwise or have someone else make you think otherwise!
| Beautiful-Bird-Avenger99 chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Now that poke at Series 3 was just rude.(jk i do that all the time, everything will be out before series 3)
| Shadow Sora94 chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
As someone who read this before (and feels bad he didn't review it now), let me just say I loved this story and I do look foward to seeing this rewrite c:
| wedertz chapter 18 . 10/21/2013
Although I'm disappointed your not finishing this story, I understand your reasons why. This is one of those very rare decent crossover fics. I wish you life, love and happiness.