|Reviews for Harry's Birthday Wish|
| DesirePassion chapter 25 . 8/6/2011
Thank you so much for the update! Please update soon. :)
Yay, Harry is calling Sev 'dad' now. I'm so happy for them both. Having someone to call 'dad' is really something people can take for granted. :)
I like the tickle torture scene. Hmm, I wonder if Sev has a ticklish spot. I hope that Harry finds it soon.
I think that the punishments were fair especially since, Snape explained to each of them exactly WHY they were being punished.
Hahahahahahahaha, I LOVE Snape's thoughts. They are so adorable and hilarious. I'm glad that he gets biscuits too.
I can't wait for Harry to get lessons from Poppy. Would that be during the summer?
Hey, what's Quirrel been up to?
Will Lupin read Harry's letter?
| MsBeeHaven chapter 25 . 8/6/2011
As per usual, I throughly enjoyed this chapter. Seriously 'Puppy need a potion?', too freakin funny. I commend you on another installment of your story being truly fun, visual and uplifting. I am finding that you have an ability to balance the serious nature with the fun and light humour very well. I am all too familiar with how difficult it can be to maintain that aspect whilst still capturing your audience in a manner that holds them in a world of entertainment and enjoyment. Again you have delivered a chapter that I am sure so many people have enjoyed reading. I know I certainly have(I had to read it twice). I absolutely adore the manner of Severus' character development, and his obsession with 'Molly's biscuits'. I commend you on another beautiful and enjoyable work of art. To me writing is as much an art form as painting, which I also do, and is no less difficult, perhaps more so as it requires a talent that few posess to maintain the image, emotions and setting of an entire world and not just a single scene.
I think this is the longest review I have ever written, but it is worth every letter typed to show you just how much your story and creativity has affected me.
Truly Appreciative Fan
| Rori Potter chapter 25 . 8/6/2011
That was brilliant. Hilarious and sad in parts! Well done! Update soon.
| DM-sama chapter 22 . 8/5/2011
Of course, Harry is gonna call Severus, 'Dad'! He HAS too! DDDDD:
LOL, I think that, besides the adorable Snape and Harry scenes, the arguments Severus has his head is my absolute FAVORITE part! It's hilarious, I crack up everytime! XDDD
| SeverusMalfoy15 chapter 25 . 8/5/2011
Hey! Loved this chapter, and Severus' response to Harry calling him dad! Thanks for posting can't wait for chap. 26! )
| MalikaiDragonSlayer chapter 25 . 8/5/2011
I love how Sevvy has a mental freak out because no one gives him cookies.
| ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 25 . 8/5/2011
i loved 's letter made me cry.
| SAGGYHERMAN chapter 25 . 8/5/2011
fab chapter, Severus is really chilling out
| FuryPossessed chapter 25 . 8/5/2011
Wooo! Harry called him Dad!
Great chapter as always, can't wait for the update - What is Mrs. Weasley's Howler going to say? Wanna know!
| almightyswot chapter 25 . 8/5/2011
Awwwww I loved every inch of this chapter especially snapes inner monogues they are hillarious :D
| AppleSVU chapter 25 . 8/5/2011
Very nice chapter :) Great job :)
Looking forward to seeing the next chapter :)
| Angel JJK chapter 25 . 8/5/2011
Awwww, that letter was sweet! Please continue!
| Azzy97 chapter 25 . 8/5/2011
love sev wanting biscuits and his reaction to harry calling him dad great chapter.
| marksmom chapter 25 . 8/5/2011
So sweet! You should have let Severus cry...just to show that he is indeed human...but, I'm not the one writing this story. I loved it! Kudos!
| ImmortalGlee chapter 25 . 8/5/2011
ok well im not one to review alot but i have to say im enjoying this story i like to see the happy part of severus snape im also looking forward to see the golden trio and snape interact. I may not review all the time but i am here chering you on keep p the good work.