|Reviews for Harry's Birthday Wish|
| mithrilandtj chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
Awww... I love their interaction. It's so cute!
| pokemon-hogwarts4eva chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
Shut Up SNAPE! I did not ask you!
I am you, you idiot!
Great now I'm calling myself names.
(love severus' internal thoughts and battle among himself)
| attyfan chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
| CrazyReader3 chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
Snapes inner dialogue is hilarious and very well done. Add to it child-Harry's thoughts and this chapter is very entertaining, as well as setting the tone for the interaction between the two. Developing it would much improve upon the canon relationship shown in the books. Harry's new situation and his innate wisdom is such that he would understand enough, probably, about Snape's former Deatheater background, and keep up appearances in front of other students when the schoolyear commences...I think this would be a better scenario for the plot to develop with a more favorable outcome than the outright hatred displayed in canon. Keep it up and enjoying the story immensely...it is by far one of the more enjoyable Snape-mentor fics I have read. Thank you.
| Angel JJK chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
Cool! Think that maybe Luna could become friends with Harry! Please continue!
| B00kw0rm92 chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
Wonderful chapter! This one was so sweet! I really loved it and I can't wait for more!
| LunaBeth203 chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
i just read all 13 chappys of this story and loved it it's the best Harry/snape mentor abuse fic ive read- will you do first year coz if so can he be in gryffindor coz he'd be so lonley in slytherin and he's so brave and then snape would be angey but he couldn't really be angry coz it's harry he can be in slytherin but thats just my opion please update soon
| FuryPossessed chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
Can Minerva appear soon? And when is Harry going to venture outside?
Great chapter, and yeah definitely more lighthearted than the last one. I like how Severus is STILL trying to convince himself he doesn't care all that much for Harry.
| Rori Potter chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
Brilliant. Update soon.
| cara-tanaka chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
Love it. Update soon
| CarelessAngel16 chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
Great chapter! It's just funny, Harry's sweetness and Severus' internal arguments. Keep it up! xx
| MlleHibou chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
I definitely liked this chapter, it is much more lighthearted. The interaction between Harry and Slinky is great! I think it would be good to see Severus do some activities with Harry to help the child build confidence and trust, even if it's just playing Wizard's Chess. As for new appearances in the story, I think Harry and Hermione would work well together, in terms of studying, etc., since Harry obviously loves to read.
| CheyCheyRainy chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
I would like it if Remus showed up and explained why he had been kept away. This is really good and I like it. This is one of the few stories that can make me laugh in the same chapter that it made me cry in. I cry at the parts with Harry and laugh at Severus's dual personalities. :D
| bunny109 chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
l like dorco and lucis good guys
| Zireael07 chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
I loved the chapter. Absolutely. I like the way Severus is able to ... maybe not understand, but relay his ideas to Harry. And the house elf. And the 'sirs' every moment.