Reviews for Pax
bbmassey88 chapter 49 . 4/25
Once again! Don’t know where I’ve been that I haven’t read this story, love Jasper and Bella and I love this one! You are good!
froggyqueen chapter 49 . 3/18
I thought D would have a mate in Lisa. That would be full circle. Loved the stories !
CAMJ1993 chapter 49 . 2/24
Ahhhh this was such a great trilogy to read! Thank you so much!
LdyJulanna chapter 1 . 10/22/2020
Thanks for this wonderful story. It was very well written and very entertaining. I literally marathon all three parts and could not stop. I just recently got into reading twilight fanfiction for the hell of it and I personally have always not been a very big fan of the twilight situation because the two main characters made very little sense to me on the hell's going to be okay with some FREAK climbing in their bedroom window even before their dating? I really could not understand the whole attitude Bella had with Edward although the Civil War character of Jasper did appeal to me and I always felt that he didn't get enough screen, or book time so I am more into reading twilight fanfiction. Now that I have discovered the great number of Jasper Bella pairings and this is one of most entertaining I have read so far I have all of them in my bookmarks.
Lemonmelons chapter 48 . 5/28/2020
Thank you!
Lemonmelons chapter 11 . 5/27/2020
Oh, so the self deprecating, constantly worrying Bella am wrote is making an appearance. That was unexpected but sort of neat considering she is now living pretty much the opposite life of the teenager in forks in every way.
Lemonmelons chapter 9 . 5/27/2020
Hey, not fair to hold the bodyguard ransom! Even though you're threat to kill him for a lack of reviews is years old and I cannot impact good existence I still feel inclined to defend him.
Lemonmelons chapter 3 . 5/27/2020
I don't understand why Jasper would be number one. Bella and him won against the volturi together, he didn't stand a chance without her.
Mari Wollsch chapter 49 . 5/27/2020
super great! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Mary chapter 49 . 3/1/2020
I have just finished reading the trilogy and I love them. I almost wish that these were the real books
kathrinmucki chapter 49 . 2/19/2020
I have just read all three parts of this story and thank you very much for your writing.
I love this story very much
MortalMusic chapter 49 . 1/25/2020
I don't normally review but can I just say I'd kill for an au outtake threesome with Bella, Jasper, and Demetri? Lol I loved this!
Lovely Black Butterfly chapter 13 . 1/21/2020
WHAT ! That little conniving midget! She orchestrated that whole scene. Now that she knows Rutilio is Chelsea's mate now she wants Jasper back and had Chelsea break the bond?
Caerylin chapter 49 . 11/1/2019
Just finished reading the series again (for the hundredth time ) and wanted to send some love :) Love the Whitlocks so much
tabbicat23 chapter 49 . 8/9/2019
I read all three of this saga and it is very very very good, the only thing I wish we would have gotten as the discussion between Demetri and Bella. Overall one of my favorite stories
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