|Reviews for Moving On|
| Ersatz Einstein chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
This has some grammatical errors ('"Are we still friends," one of His best friend's asked.') and it really needs to be expanded, but you have a good idea.
| autumnrose2010 chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Is that supposed to be Judas Iscariot that Jesus is talking to?