|Reviews for Meloetta's Sexy Suspender Striptease|
| shadowfan999 chapter 6 . 2/10
sexy meloetta with her farting booty i hope she survived
ps:please update this fic with a new chapter i cant wait to read what happens next
| shadowfan999 chapter 5 . 2/9
and what a sexy farting booty meloetta has
| shadowfan999 chapter 4 . 2/8
meloetta is so sexy when she farts
| shadowfan999 chapter 3 . 2/7
poor meloetta got frozen solidXD
| shadowfan999 chapter 2 . 2/6
poor meloetta got reminded of that joltik
| shadowfan999 chapter 1 . 2/5
oh no i hope they are okay
| Patato chapter 5 . 7/3/2014
| Chowdit1 chapter 5 . 8/20/2013
Please continue the fanfic, because you stopped where the story starts.
| sonic 6000 chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
good can you make a story where meloetta blows her nose?
| wtf chapter 5 . 7/15/2013
wtf i admit i've read worse but seriously and must every fanfiction about meloetta involve that stupid icing fetish best charachter ever just being turned into a disgusting bitch
| PurpleCobra247 chapter 5 . 3/26/2013
TA-HA-HA-HA! That ending was just priceless!
| Yoshizilla-Fan chapter 5 . 5/29/2012
Hey, I noticed you posted Chapter 5 exactly one year ago after Chapter 1! Also, Meloetta's fantasy should be real.
| Stalker mouse chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Hee hee hee. german abomasnow LO friggen L
| Oathkeeper chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
O_o...welp Guess theyer dead.
| Anon chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
I can see where this is gonna go.