Reviews for Their First Kiss
Writing-in-Colors chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
Wahhh oh my gosh that was really good! I love that scene also where he just holds onto her and then kisses her .
Lylex96 chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
Kendra chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
You should be poet for things like this Excellent poem
WolfishMoon chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Just perfect. It wonderfully captures the tone of that episode and the desperation on both sides. Lovely. Just lovely.
Rose Prophetess chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
I believe you picked a good perspective to write from.

It is accurate according to the episode.
Q-A the Authoress chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
How touching. _

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
Dragonmorph chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Aww, that was very touching.

I love the show and the episode where they share a first kiss, which makes me happy they are going to be together. You really pulled it off just like "Warmth- Just for now." That's Episode 7 XD