Reviews for Scorpius's Request
Guest chapter 21 . 8/17/2011
That was so cute, very well written and planned. I'm truly impressed
overbooked chapter 21 . 8/13/2011
I really enjoyed this story. I like the way you combined the mystery with the growing affection between Harry and Scorpius. Good use of the supporting characters, too-Ron and Hermione contributed to the solution, Molly was good as a babysitter, and even Ernie helped. (Any relation to the founders of the Muggle company Macmillan Publishers?) Nicely done, and I'm looking forward to the sequel.
Peevey chapter 21 . 8/10/2011
Dear StarShineDC,

I normally don't take the time to review because it's difficult to do so on my phone, but I am so glad I was at home when I came across this because I have a computer so I can type this out. This is definitely one of the best stories I have have read in a long time (that's including the 20 books I have bought in the last three months). I love the way you write Scorpius. His love of apples made me laugh, because it reminds me of so many kids I've watched who would only eat one kind of food. I can't wait to read the sequel and just want to say that I stayed up all night to read this one (it's now 3:30 am) and am going onto the next right now.


p.s. if you ever need a beta or any kind of editing done I wholeheartedly volunteer my services.
SnarkyBubble chapter 21 . 8/9/2011
I really enjoyed this! I thought the way you wrote the mystery was really intriguing and all the wizard stuff was cool and authentic-sounding. And I love the idea of Draco having this secret job. Haha nice! Can't wait to read the sequel :D
No available name chapter 21 . 8/4/2011
Oh, that was so sweet, and I loved the end :) Amazing story can't wait to read the sequel
Les Dowich chapter 21 . 8/3/2011
Very good, a nice balance of action, sentiment and story. Hope hte sequel comes out soon


deactivatedaccount0987656789 chapter 21 . 8/2/2011
okay. i love you. this is basically perfect. the most pivotal points of the last two chapters, mainly the endings, seemed a bit rushed. but other then that, parfait. SEQUEL. its not a question :]
Krysler chapter 21 . 8/1/2011
Awww, this entire fic was so great! I loved the mystery and Draco's kidnapping, but my absolute favourite parts were Scorpius' interactions with Harry- he's just too cute! I can't wait for the sequel!
Pontythings chapter 21 . 8/1/2011
omg it's done I can't whate for the sequel!
Actual-Grendel chapter 21 . 7/31/2011
skaulitz267 chapter 21 . 7/31/2011
OMG! I love it! I can't wait to read the sequel and find out what happens to Astoria and Goyle. Plus, see how Draco and Harry's relationship is going. I have a feeling that at some point Scorpius might be playing match maker. I like it how Harry and Draco were flirting with eachother without noticing or doing it out right. I hope that the sequel will be long like this story or longer. I don't want them to get together quickly. Please try to draw it out as much as you can and when they do finally get together keep writing, No need to stop! Keep writing you genius! :)
sarenelsoria chapter 21 . 7/31/2011
Great story really amusing, I loved little Scorpius
LadyGhai chapter 21 . 7/31/2011
amazing i love it! haha.. can't wait for the sequel!
Mogg chapter 21 . 7/31/2011
I have really enjoyed reading this story, and will miss it now it is finished! Please write a sequel (you could make it a series if you want to and I'm sure no one would mind ;-) it would be good to see how Draco and the other characters interact and Scorpius with the new baby.
Yume-in-the-sky-with-diamonds chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
I've read the entire fic and I have to say I love it! The way you made Harry and Draco connect without even being in real contact with each other is really well done and the fact that Scorp is still needy and cries for his father gives it a more real feel to him. Also, I enjoy the flow of the story and like your writing style a lot.

I do hope you write a long one like this again!

Keep up the brilliant work!
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