|Reviews for Scorpius's Request|
| macgruberrr chapter 20 . 6/25/2012
ahhhh! I freaking loved this! it was exciting and it kept me anticipating the end (too see Astoria get her ass handed to her!) and it was so CUTE. especially this part (my favorite) He giggled. "I like 'Mione. She let me touch her belly and it moved. She said there's a whole baby in there. How's it gonna get out?"
Ron looked back at Harry, eyes wide. Harry shook his head, shrugging. "Um," Ron tried. "It's going to get out by... magic."
"Babies can do magic?"
"Yeeees," he said slowly.
| ReindeerGamesofMischief chapter 21 . 6/25/2012
I started your story this morning and just finished it.
I LOVE how adorable Scorpius is! I would love to cuddle him! Haha.
I must say that I really liked this story overall. I really do, and I am on my way to read the sequel!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Your stories are nice - but there are so many jarring Americanisms.
Gotten - it just isn't a word British people use. As soon as I see gotten in a story I just have to download it and edit it for all Americanisms before I carry on reading.
Also math ... it's maths ... short for mathmatics you know.
Bangs - again - no British person uses bangs - you mean "a fringe".
There are also a lot of other Americanism "great big old ..." and things like that.
If you could write in British English rather than American English your stories would be so much more authentic.
| BlackReaver chapter 21 . 6/8/2012
My god. It's two in the morning and i've just spent the last two hours reading your story from start to finish. I absolutely love it! Thank you for sharing!
| FARISWHEEL chapter 21 . 5/23/2012
Love it! Scorpius is adorable! I love Harry, adn Draco's books sound amazing!
| w- easy enough chapter 21 . 5/20/2012
omg, this was so cute! Scorpius just captured everyone's heart, including mine! off to read the sequel now! _
| The Lazy Princess chapter 21 . 5/18/2012
Hey...this os such a lovable story...Scorp so cute...
Gonna read the sequel next...hope to HP/DM...who is sub/dom in this series...
| MioneWriter007 chapter 21 . 4/18/2012
This was by far the most amazing story i've read! yes, i did spend today sitting and reading this it was wonderfully written. I can't wait to get to the sequel! Great Job.
| MioneWriter007 chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
OMG i saw this on DA and WOW i'm so happy it's posted here!
| bellalib chapter 21 . 4/8/2012
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! YOUR WRITING WAS RIGHT ON THE MONEY... I SEEN THIS STORY PLAY IN MY MIND.. I AM SO IN LOVE WITH LITTLE SCORPIUS... THANK YOU FOR WRITING SUCH A WONDERFUL, EXCITING AND HEART FELT STORY!
| HarryDracoDizzy chapter 21 . 3/31/2012
Awwwh! This was such an amazing story! :') I wish you had added al bit more Harry and Draco in it... Although you do have a sequel! I cannot wait to read it! xD
| 19missybaker63 chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Your stories have made me absolutely adore little Scorpious, well, older Scorpious too and Draco and Harry and their interaction with Scorpious. Please keep writing and I promise to keep reading.
| Liz Night chapter 21 . 3/21/2012
I seriously love this! Scorpius is so adorable! I should be working, but I can't help it! I'm adicted to the cuteness! Awesome job!
| BladeMaxwell-GoddessofDeath chapter 21 . 3/1/2012
I loved it!
I found this story andread it all in a night :)
I'll read the sequal after Isleep lol
I love the sweetness of the story along with the angst and love
| nikkidomsijohn chapter 21 . 2/27/2012
that is so sweet