Reviews for I'm all yours
Guest chapter 4 . 11/7/2013
Your so good! Keep writing!
emsterloo chapter 5 . 11/23/2012
It was a good shortish story. ;) I really liked it and I was kinda wishing someone would write something about that part. I like it even though it's pretty much just a bunch of kissing. haha
rainyhologrampeanut chapter 5 . 10/25/2012
I'm sad there isn't more. I totally understand tjough it's not like it can perpetuate in the middle of the book.
love10134 chapter 3 . 7/28/2011
Very amazing again cant eait for the nect update:)
love10134 chapter 2 . 7/24/2011
very very amazing :)
Pre chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Aww. It's sweet. :)
CarlaElaine chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
I think it was great! It was fluffy, and adorable, and just great! :) I also think you should continue it!

- Great Job!
liz chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
spottedhorse chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Nicely done. I think you captured the feelings of a high school girl making out with her boyfriend well. That is what this is, isn't it, lol? I noticed a couple of typos but that happens to even the best of us. I do appreciate that you've paid attention to grammar. There are so many writers out there that just don't seem to care. None of us are perfect with it but I think stories are so much more readable when good grammar is used. The most important thing is that in this story, you've put us in the car with them and we can feel what Ruby is feeling. Again, very nicely done. I'd love to see more stories from you!