Reviews for The Moon Heir Part 1 the Lost Ones
josh01264 chapter 15 . 9/4/2016
This is a really good crossover but I can't finish, way to much MINDFUCKING
josh01264 chapter 10 . 9/4/2016
When u be making them satyrs look badass xD
slythian chapter 81 . 8/28/2016
Great story all the way through
Guest chapter 2 . 6/18/2016
and done with this story. Kyuubi? really? The actual nine tails of mythology was chinese not japanese, also it was not a god, but a spirit. They don't have super powers and they certainly don't qualify as gods, also there are more than 1 nine tailed foxes. next time base your story off of actual mythology and not naruto
Guest chapter 81 . 2/10/2016
this is the worst story i have ever had the mistfortune to read it make no sense

it's confuseing full of bullshit and nonsense

who ever wrote this story should delete it from their computer on princible alone.

i hope to never see an update from this piece of trash
jackalope33 chapter 47 . 1/2/2016
quick question- why does Hephestus want percy dead? percy helped him with st Heleans and never gave him a reason to hate percy
jackalope33 chapter 1 . 1/1/2016
ok did you just pull a rick and leave us with prophecies that we have no idea of the meaning and if it could have double or even tripple meanings ? if so great job! so little fanfictions have authors that are this good! actually this is the first or second i have read and trust me i have read tons (over 200 if i remember correctly)
ASSASSINEZIO chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
need to put ur comments in bold
61394 chapter 30 . 7/3/2015
he's really both
WhAtAfAnFiC chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
cool prophecy (; Nice part about the kanes zea and ra Oh and the part about artemis's child
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
Given you have 81 chapters here, I think I know the answer to your question at the end :-P
61394 chapter 9 . 10/22/2014
if nico is the second whose hades greatest kid
InflatedChimp chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
You need a divider between story and A/N
afroparty chapter 31 . 7/8/2013
devo342 chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
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